My Artistry

[lyrical1]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OE6Zohw0tRI

Quality jacked I know, same as the others more or less

[Livenlearn]

I know ya quality is messed up, but u might wanna wait til u can fix b4 u post because it takes away from delivery, try not posting on youtube and use soundcloud or reverb cuz youtube automatically reduces quality...but listening to it u def. sound really nice lyrically, def. a couple of strong multi's and metaphors...U dropped a good track here, I just wish it sounded better becuz I wuld listen to it repeatedly but that wont be case now...the hook wasnt too gr8 but the verses out shined a need for it to be but so good...keep it up man and if anything wrk on ur quality...

[lyrical1]

no doubt, my intention is to take care of that the next time I record a series of tracks. Thx for the feeback, input and suggestions.

[Deciple]

the beat is old school feeling... Good lyrics... flowed along time.. kinda got boring tho.. but you were on point for the most part.. its a good drop

[lyrical1]

yeah, I felt that way after i did it but I just let it ride. Had it been a more intense flow it wouldnt lulled as much, but given the beat it really wasnt necessary.

Good looks on the feedbk

[2xS]

Real Hip Hop Beat. I Know A Dude Who Would LOVE To Get his Hands On This. I Like The Vibe It Brings To the Table Already Fam. Quality, You Already Know. You Gotta Good Delivery Yet Again, Multi's Are On Point. LOL @ Tha Edgar Allen Line. I Used A Similar One In My Battle Against Punch'd Drunk. Levels Of The Vatican. 5 Star Generals, Yo Nice Multi's On That Lol. I Didn't Need To Transform To Reach My Optimus Prime. NICE! Good Shit Fam. Vocab Is Raw, Idk Bout The Ending, Kinda Ehh On That one As Well. good track Tho. Deff Got Alot Of Talent And Skill Amongst your Lyrics

[lyrical1]

^good looks homie, i def be takin all the advice im gettin