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Live With The Raps *Will Return Feed/Drop A Link*

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qPaM6R3xLhY[/video]

These haters listen, respect me and pay attention
They'd pay admission, just to hear me say a fuckin sentence (I'm)
Sicker than half of y'all, better at rappin raw
You get no dap at all, you touch the mic and pass it off
I'm tappin jaws, rockin faces with my combinations
Your job is blatant, cause hatin's your occupation
.........I been waitin, I'm ready to hold it down
I haven't had a cavity, so there's no steel-in-my-crown
I get down, dirty, and grimey for real
If Cole met his match you must be lightin a grill
I'm live with the skill, anyone beside me is killed
If you survive a cypher with me then most likely you're ill
The mic that you wield....is gettin stole in a flash
Like an indian's soul whenever ya snappin a photograph
Grab a cloak and mask...I move in silence
Takin over crews like Somalian pirates
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this verse was pretty ill... good punches, rhymes, delivery was sick.. time to turn this into a track.. haha good listen man..
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Thanks man, appreciate it. I think I'm going to try my hand at audio battles and then finally full scale solo songs.
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This was really dope man, I never heard of you before but you have some dope lines. I liked that Cavity line. Good luck on making some full songs
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Post by 2xS »

I Fucks Wit Tha Beat. Sounds Like There's A Little Too Much Reverb, And It Sounds Like Sumtimes You Are Backing Up From The Mic, And Then Coming Close To It. Kinda Wavy. You Got Sum nice Lyrics Here, Flow Is Smooth For Tha Most Part. "If Cole met his match you must be lightin a grill" Funny. Anyways, Good Shit. Nice Punches. I'ma Have Ta Listen To Ur Sum More When You Drop. I Like The Whole Short Free Verse Style As well. Good Listen
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