Miss It All

[Haz]

No Home No Phone Blow Zone
Chose Chrome Dro Combed Bagged Swept/
Dose Rowed Till Dem Cats Left
Hustlin Has A Destiny To "catch-Death"/
Jealous Dood im Tellin U He In "Hell wit fuel"
Gunna Kill You i'll Spell It Thru "Dettached Head"/
Its A Sad Bet How Kids Gamble They Lives
Hookas Needa Survive Young Braud Gambles ha Thighs/
She Got Brough tto The Motel By Sum Young Boiiz,
Beat Ha Down Thought She a Slut Toy/
Her Pride Got Stripped Like No Nude Vision
He Grabbed Hiz Gat Bitch Knew Doods Desicion/
He left Ha Wit No Stitchin A Empty Lid
i'll Bust shotz Fa Da Poor Soul Till My Semi Hit/
Rocs Get You Hot On The Block
Fienes Strt To Cop At Spots Get Robbed
End Up "Topless Popped" This Never Stops Its Drop'd/
Beef Settles N Gos Friends Fam Enemies Or Dro
Should I Peddal My "Boat" Swim Hiigh Or Send Shellz
To Jus Choke/ I Kno I Got Hatahs Devil Creepin Out
i'll Make It Rain Wit Tears Fa Lost He Jus Makes It
Drought/

[complexity]

"Hustlin Has A Destiny To "catch-Death"/ "

hustling has a tendency to catch up with you
hustling has a destiny, its called death
hustling has a destiny, death will catch up with you

anything like that. the way you word it is so ackward man. I really think you have potential.

If you just try for a whole piece to just say what you would normally say when talking to someone. I guarantee you will like it that much better.

You have already fixed your structure. And this was an interesting piece to say the least. Thats just because of the way you word everything. Not so much the topic.

I see improvement and this is the last piece that I tell you to stop sounding like a weirdo from mars.

[Haz]

LMAO LMAO LMAO .. Complex Man Thats How
It Fit Though Wit The Other Rhymin Words u Kno
So i Jus Rhymed Those Off .. But Thanks Fa
Sayin u See improvement