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at the center of physics so call me core gravity
never at the top that's just a way to fall gradually
that guy to kill emcee's so i murder em all rapidly
if they throw a punch back, then seq will brawl happily
You'll fall casually and to me that's just a normality
To be honest me being the victim is the norm actually
Most rappers have forgot lyrics and gone clarity
Hip-hop now show's no energy like a warn battery
I'm a sick person like i was a re born allergy
my lyrics are more explicit then a porn gallery

I was bored.









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Post by Quix »

not bad .. seemed pretty forced tho!


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Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Multi's and flow are on point. A few punches were cool. IMO you couldve done better,
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Post by Riggz »

Nice flow Sequence. I actually enjoyed it. Some nice punches in there for the quickie.. but the flow was what made it stand out.
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Thanks for the feed, yeah i wasn't going for anything to special on the punchline side of things, was just trying something abit different.
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