It's Been To Long..

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Fri Dec 10, 2010 12:29 am

Check it..

I'm sick of emcees and there sympathy pleas I'm what this industry needs
cut deep on a beat it instantly bleeds, diss you and watch ya dignity seize..
The way i write i main writers then jump out to you like stage divers..
punch em out like cage fighters, through em off a plane with no gear or hang gliders..
I'm considered a hip hop pro a tip top flow no feedback when ya spit shit bro
on a a beat I'm known to to drop more knowledge then you dip shit's know..
I've had more beef then cattle stock more up and down then a shuttle cock
but you wouldn't wanna battle Scott have you dripping slow like a paddle pop..
Time is up it's a sign you suck It's how it is so i rhyme with crunch
I'm a punchline rapper not because I'm funny but i deliver every line with punch..

Riggz · Post by **Riggz** » Fri Dec 10, 2010 12:33 am

The Australian ASSassin is back! LOL! Aussie Aussie Aussie Scott.
"The way i write i main writers then jump out to you like stage divers..
punch em out like cage fighters, through em off a plane with no gear or hang gliders..."

Nice punches in there. I was digging the cattle stock, battle Scott, paddle pop bar too.

Glad to see you back man.

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Fri Dec 10, 2010 12:38 am

Haha what's going on riggz..
Yeah it's a been a while too long -.-

thanks for the feedback

Lyrical Gen · Post by **Lyrical Gen** » Fri Dec 10, 2010 5:20 am

Not bad...this had some lines I liked:

I'm sick of emcees and there sympathy pleas I'm what this industry needs
cut deep on a beat it instantly bleeds, diss you and watch ya dignity seize..
The way i write i main writers then jump out to you like stage divers..
punch em out like cage fighters, through em off a plane with no gear or hang gliders..
^^^You could've rearranged the wording to make it hotter but this was dope.

but you wouldn't wanna battle Scott have you dripping slow like a paddle pop..
^^^That was nice

Overall, nice verse. I'm new here but hey w/e, welcome back lol.

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Fri Dec 10, 2010 2:44 pm

Ha. thanks for the feed

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Fri Dec 10, 2010 2:58 pm

yeah this shit was dope... good to see ur still droppin bro... keep it up!

-- Thu Dec 09, 2010 10:58 pm --

yeah this shit was dope... good to see ur still droppin bro... keep it up!

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