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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=56nJWAbt ... re=related[/video]

Am I to play the victim, proclaim the mission is missin'
a certain mistress, to save you the instant u say ur distant
lost amongst the play, I miss it, but hate when u insist it
say I'm made for the position, only to play old maid, persistent
I hate when you kick it, with so many other men, I shed doubt
feel left out, head out, try to make you jealous, instead, found
I'm blessed, now I can't figure out what I've really stressed bout
considering the factors, the bastards who claim they asked ya
to share the future like I asked ya, sure I may be the last (uh)
well not the last man you'd ask but...I doubt you'd ever ask hun
cuz in orderly fashion, Titanic, you only board when passin'
become bored with the passion, or what I can't afford, card inactive
a car that needs a constant tune up, and all the drinks you threw up
only prove love is punch drunk, but the punch is that you love drunk love
drunk lust.....and came...with a different perspective afterwards
so after words, we discuss only what eyes disguise as language
only the body can decipher the anguish, and that's all you came with
as you shake and shiver, going through withdrawals and become disgusted
now the substance sticks to your brain and takes you out the discussion
your mind bangs the percussion, and the strings start to get pulled
and the night prior, well that just seems to really leave me fooled
cuz everything told...well...it never happened, it was just nightfall
you leave me distant again..get up and leave...saying you might call
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is that a shameless bump ? O_O

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Feelin it,I could picture that bein drop on a video hook up

...I doubt you'd ever ask hun
cuz in orderly fashion, Titanic, you only board when passin'
become bored with the passion, or what I can't afford, card inactive

tight
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thanx brah....keep doing what it is that u do :)

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Damn... damn.... bro, your story telling method is flawless. You have not only an impressive vocabulary but the way u draw pictures with ur words is awesome. Wish I could quote but its hard on a cell phone, so ill just say the whole damn thing is on point. When am I going to get to hear some of your writtens on audio? Kudos on being consistent with your writtens man <-- haha, that rhymed.

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