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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fpUbu9vuJFM new music video of me up

gots the lyrics in the video
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cool story bro
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thanx hommie
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Its cool man, not really my cup of tea if I drank tea. Rhymings good, but seems forced at times. As for the mixing, try seding your vocals through the same track as your beat, it sounds like 2 different elements, and that might help. Good drop none the less homie, keep it up...
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