This is a Sample lyric just let me know how it sounds

[Kelzgio]

Crazy Crazy
Yeah like nicki minaj
Chaotic dreams just like a mirage
Roller coaster ride
But this dont feel like whoa
Left rite left rite which way do i go
Life aint a compass, the way it wont show
Day dreamin is my mind set
Give me a mic and like a G4 watch my mind jet
Imma let yall marinate that like a steak
While i sit back cuz this rap game ima take.

Lyrically im a murderer
Something like mike myers
mentally ima gut ya
does this sound normal to u
no it shouldnt hell it couldnt
I am waynes twin just not human..

[sylent]

To be honest im not tryin to sound like I know wat im talkin about but the rhyme scheme was very basic and not enough meaning in ur lines for me to even say that was decent u know how to put ur words together which is a start but try to have a meaning for ur writtens

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[The Man]

Not bad, definitely need a little more creativity in the rhyme schemes, start with that and then things will fall into place better.