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look at me......but dont think....its odd to see...

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yea its beutiful...move....in my way..youll....neva mind groove....or else...my mayo and yayo ...mixed...togethor...have no sense...your head....empty....of reds....due to my infa red....watch what it does....it scopes and skids.....dont watch me do this......tell your near kids....i'ma disturbed human...grim reaper ....sort of....different colors..maintain ya brain ....shaken when mode on contemplate...allhymerz....if i pop...my vessel will feel...the shock....a disorder...to make sound wak...enough thorough....sell your body....dismay of at a wok....with tupac turnips....i dont like peaple enough....so why you hate :dance: me...you gay hazey....all that trip funkadelik...fall to peaces into written.....thesis ....raw dawgs dont like you end to end in the deli...i'll ....ill kill freaky frankenstein...and abort the city.....light will flick you out of sight....and depress your mighty spirits....hang you like mexico does and clame babies juices....from or with out....my mik will turn you inside out.....eat ya carcus by reps that sound pretty percise.....make china eat more rice....and change all your names to richard rise.....my fame is in dallas underground the darkest hiphop illa kuz i ills on gangstas born really prankstas out of terminoligy ......torn by their incarcerating having sex to play off moods from their walk when it was all a scene of aplogy.... :dance:
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Re: look at me......but dont think....its odd to see...

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Didn't really feel this at all don't kno where ur bars end or begin so flow was off try a different rhyme scheme to make ppl actuallly understand u do it like this ppl get bored fast

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Re: look at me......but dont think....its odd to see...

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Wow, is this Deaf Shady or BigP?
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