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My Struggle *REMASTERED*

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Colossus
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Re: My Struggle *REMASTERED*

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Mutual took care of it already. Thanks for checking it out.
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Re: My Struggle *REMASTERED*

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That chick voice or whatever got annoying so i was glad the verse started lol... Vocals could come up a bit, good verse tho, wasnt really the style of flow i usually like but for how you presented it, its tight.. good work

If you can feed back on these to tracks
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/windy ... 14296.html

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/dead- ... 15922.html

Also any other you just see floating in the chamber.. Appreciate it
Last edited by Deciple on Tue Nov 16, 2010 6:44 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: My Struggle *REMASTERED*

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are you th3ch3mist?
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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