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Haz
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So this morning in my sistas house I sniffed the couch
pissed out of my mind because what it Shitted out ..
I say that can't be ! just wanting to Split in doubt
Like the pussy lips of this clumps Fictious mouth
Are you missing something or What Am I spitting Bout?
heating up like a fatal fever I'm never Racial either
Get ya nasal cleared Like dripping due to Naval heaters
My wife walks in while i'm Watching Cable's Cheaters
see's the Mark n smacked the handsome out my Facial Features
I Kick the couch just to see the blob..Could this be his Job!?
Followed by 'Lets see in Sob my goo of genes is being robbed
Ready to tell my braud Good Evening Tootsie,when shes Semen Pushy
I Ask Her..Why Act Like a STAIN following me is Beating Pussy???
Then I hear a Bang.. a Knock At The Door, Guns Drawn
Asking where iv'e Been I Hollared I Stopped At The Store
They said we got pics of you at a Truck stop with a whore
getting whop from the slore, cutting her up then Chopping some more
I shuffle to the Side about to Flip i'll be Hit Till i'm THIRTY
but a full out stan is like a packed audience Is this Worthy??
Never knew being iLL was a Crime.. or good descions would Hurt Me
In my head going crazy like god make me an appointment with the sane
My eyes met my wifes .. She bit her lip then Pointed To The Stain !!!
So the cops took the cuffs I tried to Run,Stun'd Thought I'd Make It Further
What My Bitch Thought was.. Beating a Pussy.. The Cops Called Rape And Murder
On The FLIP SIDE The Stain Remained On The Couch ...
Though We burned All The Furniture Till None Remained In The House
..Looking at It Like a Path Of a Gun, How STAIN LESS My Route ..
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Re: Be gone..

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It was a subliminal in a topical
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Re: Be gone..

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not bad man, pretty solid drop. flow was nice. good rhymes.
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Re: Be gone..

Post by QwarterZ »

lol.....this was actually pretty slick
I was like...what's he going for here...then as I continued I was like ohhh

either way a dope piece for what it was...it wasn't too over the top
but over the top enough to really get what you were doing after the end
very nice drop, nice to see you still doing you Haz...keep it up!
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