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Sick Twisted Fantasy Of Enlightenment On The Mountain Of Fat

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mKAto2Fq ... re=related[/video]


At the crack of dawn the world shall be....





a leaky faucet, step back into the demons office
wet dreams of bossin', just slurp the semen off this
dreams is tossed in the least appeased of offense
I'm off ends switchin' off lens, cut the camera's
stashin' dust in hampers or your babies fuckin' pampers
shake of the rust and damp up that of lust and faster...
faster...shake the world as though it was a snowglobe
feel the crush of old bones stuck on interrupt...oh no
texts hit like automatic gunshots, service just runs off
like a sentence that comes off on the right track, but once lost
no going back that route, backed out into a puddle of urine
fetal, it pretty much explains the cuddle that your in...
leave em muddled and squirmin' before they can utter to a person
silence.....that's all that comes back to the mindstate...
rhyme late, i-rate, my place became covered in this pie cake
I think I'm trippin', but maybe I isn't, or maybe I didn't
maybe I'm livin' but kissed good riddance to the un-livin'
and twirled in this path created by this here ghastly creature
then I awake to the torment of reality...where I actually beat her...
she succumbs to my movements....damn...this is sick and twisted...
you kids get a kick of this don't you? and I just writ this....for....teh....lulz
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yeh liked it m8.
bit random like that otha manz said.
but still gd shit.
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this wasnt bad yo, i kind of agree with yezzir about the randomness though. it seemed to flow with the beat for the most part, but some parts werent. thats why it sucks to post a beat and lyrics because no one is flowing the same as you would when you wrote the beat. atleast you are tryin to write to beats, i can dig that. rhymes was nice and had a good flow throughout man.
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and twirled in this path created by this here ghastly creature
then I awake to the torment of reality...where I actually beat her...


sick.
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Post by Orfadox »

Yeah This Is A Nice Peice...Bit Random But Came Together Well Man
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Random shit like all the others above said.. I liked the way you put it together tho.. Shyt was nice, flow good too.
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