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Boston Dutch - Tha Greatest

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Nice lyrics, the punches were hard, but they weren't placed right, where they hit and catch your attention. The mixing needed a little work, as well as the presence. You have the swag for the song, but there just need some tweaks here and there in order to make it sound complete. Overall man nice job, just work on the mixing, rhyme structure, presence and you will be str8. If you get a chance checkout my drop at http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/new-s ... 19058.html
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you need better delivery on those punches
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thanx 4 tha feed back
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Re: Boston Dutch - Tha Greatest

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The beat sounds like madd fun yo..

But yea This was kool, I was able to enjoy it- But as you should know by now- the mixing on the Double ups man! Not doing you justice going to fast for them to be off like that... Apart from that the lyrics chill some good points a few low points where you're just riding the beat which is fine. Its a kool track man, Peep my work then holla n' get something with the same feel jumping off.

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Post by IntrinsicCadence »

Love the beat, real unique. Your flow style's pretty cool, as others have said ur punches could come better if you emphasized certain parts here and there. You got some inventive lyrics at times, and at others time the lyrics aren't too interesting. The mixing could use some work, but it ain't too bad. Overall though, this is cool, its got a unique feel about it which I appreciate...

By the way, if u get a chance five of us did a text collab that we're hoping to get some more feedback on: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/colle ... 18949.html
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thanx 4 tha feed back
OTaY!!! U No iTz
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www.reverbnation.com/bostondutch
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