quick free type over ACL beat like....

[T cross]

said.. i cant feel this beat so i had to go to sleep just to hear it
it woke me up to stand on my feet and look myself in the mirror
to tell myself this, real shit...


i remember in the late 90's hearing all of the oldies
from the Jackson Five to the Doobie Brothers. all of them, they told me
to get on my feet and start workin on my own thing
can't trust many, homie this life's like the lord of the ring
trying to come up with a little bit of some of that jewlery
and start wearing it so these bitches can start feelin me
i started flaunting it and thats when it really hit me
it's not what its cracked up to be. it's more than what i been imagining
it's about YOUR life and the wise choices of your pickings
and about taking the L bravely before all of the winnings
blow one for ones above that everyday I be missing
and blow off all the ones, that be fuckin hating
but it's amazing, how easy haters are created
it's worldwide like little kids and thier kicks getting traded
while your parents are stuck in marriage. we can all relate
some way or another like everyone at the party gettin fadded
i'm just tryin to make it and get by without sittin in the county
get me some ends, save it, buy a house in the country
but right now life's rougher than rugby, trust me
no one can feel me, not even my homies, they just suppose to be
doin them while i'm doin me, listen b
no-body can relate to my sarcasm bcuz it's not up to date
i'm in yr 2030 where the pussy be tastin like grape...
...rello's and the great weed that you will ever live to taste

...all i wrote right now, have to get going to work, didn't really take much time to think this up, just kinda kept writing for the three minutes that i had before i go make this money.

not sure if the beat is going to be added on here so here it is. give some feed and tell me whats good, again, not much time put into this but i can see already that editing is needed.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jOhMC85fWpE

[QwarterZ]

This was pretty cool actually, I caught the flow for a bit
but then I lost it, I don't know maybe some words can be ridden
while a different one could be added, but then again that's just me
either way the beat fit well with the message, and that helps the piece
you went good with multi's for a bit...then stopped....then started again, that's cool
I do that sometimes too...either way you really dropped a decent piece
keep writing my friend......

[T cross]

appreciate the feed. i'm trying to work on when my multis stop and come back. it happens a lot when i'm just free writing but it's actually helping i think. good lookin comin thru and i'll be dropping soon enough. 1