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This beat is simple but im diggin it alot.. Im diggin your voice and the tracks you put it to.. it fits it well then you add concepts and lyrics to that and you got a good track.. this is what you got.. I think a female on this track would throw it over the top tho. but lyrical, presence, delivery, all that is how it needs to be... Good stuff man
Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
shit aint that bad man, you got a different style. rhymes are pretty nice. your flow aint bad either, i think you could tighten it up just a liiiiitle bit but its there. ive only heard you on softer type beats, i want to hear something from you with some aggressive energy shit. but this was a cool drop man, keep doin ya thing.
Amazing beat,I loved the piano in it. I feel like there's something off with the mixing of this, your verse doesn't blend in with the beat like it should...if that makes sense. Other than that, great song. Flow was great, delivery was fantastic at times it was lyrically entertaining. Keep it up.
@ deciple: yea a girl would be hott tho. I need to find one because I tend to use those beats that require a nice female voice to mellow out the track. But thnx for the feed, and as always lookout for my other dropz
@ Nobleone: Lol, ok now I have to find an aggressive beat, although I think I have one in mind. There's two other I guess softer beats I want to write to but my third one will be a more aggressive beat and hopefully I will do it justice. But thnx for listening and the feedback...if you have any drops you want me to listen too leave links and Ill leave comments
@ senuts: No that make alot of sense, I'm still getting use to mixing and understand how to make different pieces of the vocal sit in the mix. This one was especially hard because I had softer and harder tones and it was hard to represent them all equally, but hopefully I get better with it over time. As you'll come to find out I always try to drop lyrical rhymes for my listeners because thats the music I like to listen to so they inspire me. But thnx man for the feedback and appreciate the listen.
