Hert

[The Gonz]

dark and bare, soul as cold as the arctic air/
Heart was snared as soon as cupid painted his target there/
But its hard to care, her emotions were fake and hollow/
Loved to taste the bottle but lust was the pill she couldn't wait to swallow/
A faceless model, body like a wingless angel/
But beauty had never came with a sting this painful/
Playful at first, she liked to be gagged and whipped/
A horny role player til the day that her dagger slipped/
The lust of a virgin, he loved when she hurt em/
Liked it rough but wasn't nuts about the blade stuck in his sternum/
As he cried with the knife deep inside his chest/
The little lioness rode him until his dying breath/
Climbed and leapt off, she laughed and swore at him/
Cuz her first kill was the first time she had an orgasm/
The porn hadn't worked, sex was ineffective/
Now dealing death was her only way to feel connected/

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

-- Sat Oct 30, 2010 3:22 pm --

To be continued

[IntrinsicCadence]

Shit man, I hope this isn't about your ex-girlfriend or anything LOL.
Ill rhythm patterns here man, as u always seem to have. Internal rhyming makes it just flow so smoothly. Your words paint a pretty vivid image for the scene. If this is gonna be part of a series, seems like it could go on forever, it seems like the story of something that could be a popular tv show, maybe something on HBO just after Dexter.
Overall, good drop, glad to see u droppin in the forums again, its been too long...

[TheNobleOne]

shit was fresh homie. no complaints.

[TJ Blaque Aka TL]

Shit man, I hope this isn't about your ex-girlfriend or anything LOL.
...

same shit i was thinkin' bruh. My dude getting all deep into his feelings and shit .

anyways this piece was tight to def , flow and concepts was ill .
Be easy.

[Phasewon]

Dope concept, nice delivery, every line was relevant to the story telling aspect and elevated the subject, multies and flow was on point, some ill shit.

[FlipSide]

Aha! this was def worth the read here... sick flow and multies..good metaphorical drop too.. the topic is sick as hell man.. I dont know where u think this shit up but its def great lol.. From the dagger slipped part i was trippin out... good drop brah

[Kau the Lion]

To be continued

I'm waiting for it.

Flow was perfect and you told an interesting story. Nice imagery really brought it to life.

[Lyrical Gen]

Sounds like a bad night in Vegas or a chick that just stabbed you through the heart.

Anywho, this joint was hard-hitting as usual. Everything was top notch: flow, multis, wordplay, illness.

Playful at first, she liked to be gagged and whipped/
A horny role player til the day that her dagger slipped/
The lust of a virgin, he loved when she hurt em/
Liked it rough but wasn't nuts about the blade stuck in his sternum/
^^^Disgusting...the best part of the verse.

Keep droppin, it was worth the read.