Ranting

[ProVerseIdy]

Fuck It, I'm Satanic, Puke In A Bucket, Fuck Up The Whole Planet,
I Just Can't Stand It, I'm Godly, Bring it If I Demand It,

Or Command It, Fuck Floating Like A Butter Fly, I Just Rain Acid,
Fuck A Last Confession, When I Die Ill Wrap Myself In Plastic,

I'm Classic, I Aint A Bitch So September 11th Wasn't Tragic,
If Rap Had Sorcery, Then I Guess I Practice Black Magic,

God Damn It, I'm In The Lead, Everyones Blown Away By My Tail Wind,
Recommend Me As The Best, In Rap, Let Me Know When I Fail Then.


Idk Just Random Shit I Was Thinking. :/

[Dana Riot]

This was ok I think you have flow, multies and creativity nailed. In these self-hyping pieces it's always good to add some wordplay or punchlines in general. I like your rhyme scheme it's similar to my own, you're really good with inner rhymes and that never fails to make a verse more fun for me to read (if it keeps with the flow lol) which it did. Good stuff you got there not perfect but nothing is. Keep it up.

[ProVerseIdy]

Good Lookin out.