The Slums (Everywhere)

[TJ Blaque Aka TL]

all over the globe, the indians and the hatians,
many races in ruins disenigrating, over populating,
from garbage homes deteriorating, patiently waiting,
second of lives going by like every night,
praying to the skies, poverty in a bind,
to realize the light, is heaven sent defined demised,
aint nothing to be wasting, every grain is precious and liberating,
which seems to be frustrating ..



The People...



With doors thats see through, welded tin roofs,
homes coming loose, tax brackets over due,
the neck of the slums? when is help coming through ?
fuck these carpenter tools and scattered out rationed food !!
everyday with life subsides and they cant deny ,
the reason to live is faith on the inside !!
cant cope with foul contracts and passed ACTS.
United States need help with food, Not no Attacks.
I hate the government system, the central enforcement needs fixin' ,
peoples crimes are pending, even when it aint they shit-and,
posted up signs and wanted ads are a fucking gimmick,
what happen to the respect , towards hate has its limits,
riots in and out, over shit thats handed out,
could be some words or exchanged "gifts" in different routes,

See No Evil ...

I speak mideval back when it's lethal,
kats trying to behead each other, instead of trying to teach people,
act before thinkin', government wants us to stay sick Look!!
The cure Information for all dieases is in a BLACK MARKET BOOK.
The world is overpopulated, Mother Earth is tired,
We better do something now before we all will expire.



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[IntrinsicCadence]

Shit yeah TL, this is one of the best pieces I've read in these forums. U do audio at all?
Keep dropping, and don't be surprised if someday in the future u get a message from me asking about the possibility of collaborating on a text or audio piece. I dig the consciousness flow u got...

[Colossus]

Being conscious is a gimmick too

[TJ Blaque Aka TL]

yeah i heard of being concious is a gimmick. But thats another story..thanks for the feed peeps . be easy .

[complexity]

"With doors thats see through, welded tin roofs,
homes coming loose, tax brackets over due,
the neck of the slums? when is help coming through ?
fuck these carpenter tools and scattered out rationed food !!"

^sick

I'm kind of baffled how to approach leaving feedback. I liked the content for the most part, think it left something to be desired. Same with the rhyme schemes.

The message was interesting and the storyline was put together well.

I'll give this an 8.5/10.

[TJ Blaque Aka TL]

Thanx I appreciate it complexity .