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Battle verse against Flipside

Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Im sure alot of people have read this, but since the battle was closed out due to him not showing (and he asked for it to be closed out, that's not any of my doing by any means, I dont like to win that way) I wanted to get some feed on this verse... Please reply and let me know what you think. Thanks.

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Just look at this dude... I mean, really?

Ayo...

We obviously have something here, is that your face or your ugly rear?
Plex been riding you again? Cuz I dont now if those are handle bars or your fucking ears!?!?!

Battle me, its a thin line, rip out ya spine when punches hit ya Flipside
Then crush ya voicebox til this boy talks likes he looks... a young Ben Stein!!!/

I bet you sent this pic to some skank hoes that probably left ya bank broke
WTF were you doing when you took this pic??? Its pretty close to your waist bro.../ (im just saying...)

I hate to have to waste bro, but face it, he's garbage like Iverson
My guess is by the shape of dude's head, during pregnancy his mom was on Vicodin!!!/

Ima beast, truest to form, Windy City? I'll let loose wit the storm
FLIPSIDE? Lol... Chi-town's only hope fuckin hung from a rope at the Music Awards!!!/
(reference to Kanye West)

Its fitted Im a profit, Im more to Illest than some scripts and the gossip
Flip lookin all curious and shit... Why the fuck it look like you live in the closet?!?!?!/


No expos, just look at the picture. Lol. Good luck Flip.
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Re: Battle verse against Flipside

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yo ill get at this laters, peep that shit i had below, against enemy dude.
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Re: Battle verse against Flipside

Post by Phasewon »

This shit was pretty good, solid battle verse, multies were present, nice comparisons, utilized the pic properly,

" Ima beast, truest to form, Windy City? I'll let loose wit the storm
FLIPSIDE? Lol... Chi-town's only hope fuckin hung from a rope at the Music Awards!!!/"

^Nice flow and structure

"Its fitted Im a profit, Im more to Illest than some scripts and the gossip
Flip lookin all curious and shit... Why the fuck it look like you live in the closet?!?!?!/"

^lol funny shit, the set up was pretty weak but the punch had the witty impact, nice diss.
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