Satanic Verses

[Phasewon]

Feed is appreciated and returned
Also, I just started fuckin' with twitter,
If I get a few followers from this site
I'll keep it updated with new lyrics and
Posting info. http://twitter.com/Phasewon


[Verse 1]
Ayo I'm twice as nice as your favorite rapper up on this mic device
Slice and dice the track, like a knife, that strikes precise
Life is shiest', Christ is here; I'm a spirit
Trapped in lyrics, I already took my life twice this year
I find your fears, and attack your weaknesses
I'll be right there in your nightmares and frequent dream sequences
Who you think you beefin' with? Nobody told you I'm crazy?
I'll hold the M80 right over the face of your baby
And blow his fuckin' brains all over the place if you play me
I'm basically saying there aint a database that can trace me
On every tape they erase me, but spin it back
The shit'll scratch the record the second it hits the wax
I mix the track with curses dispersed in Satanic verses
The mass and service was nervous to worship in Catholic churches
The pastor heard it and murdered his class of virgins
Just play my raps reversed 'n hear the Devil's graphic version


[Verse 2]
I'm a motherfuckin' cannibal with it, feasting on pets
At the animal clinic, when I'm finished they gon' think Hannibal did it;
I'm jabbin' a javelin through your abdomen and grabbin'
A shattered jagged broom handle and then I'm stabbin' you with it!
It aint an act or a gimmick, son I rhyme official
Every line'll carve you up, because I'm sharp enough to slice a ginsu
I can rip you, 'cause I'm droppin' stuff, hot enough
To melt your entire pistol when I let the fire hit you
So have your rifle with you, it won't make a difference
I'll have your baby with his facial splittin' gettin' eighty stitches
Rapin' bitches, drillin' nuns, fillin' guns, I'm still the son
Of the devil and you'll get snuffed with a pillow 'cause killin's fun
I'm ill enough to take it back to the place of your birth
Snuff you as a baby and wipe your face off the earth
Then I'm makin' it worse, by takin' the hearse, and sendin' you
Straight to hell, with your frame impaled on the gates of the church


[Verse 3]
The rappin' professor is back for a lecture, slash you and sever
Your back and then measure the fragments in fractions and patch you together
I'm more savage than ever, I massacre better
Than Hannibal Lecter in the ambulance strapped to the stretcher!
I'll handle whoever think they boxin' with Satan
Takin' hospital patients home to operate 'n play doc' in the basement
Freemason and Satanist, Jason is scrapin' your face
And erasin' your waist with the razorblade and then tastin' it
Replace the stitches in your waist with staples in it
Hang you so you dangle and your legs are kickin' while your naval's splittin'
Your face is rippin', now go play in traffic
You're such a major faggot, you prolly have cum flavored chapstick
Your favorite rapper sold his life, and I own the rights
The poltergeist'll put his soul on ice for the dopest price
I know I'm shiest', promotin' violent plagues, I hope you die of AIDS
While you open wide and deep-throat a live grenade

[Dana Riot]

Your face is rippin', now go play in traffic
You're such a major faggot, you prolly have cum flavored chapstick

LOL...

I can see you love using the multies and inners, this was really entertaining to say the least lol. I think rhymes and flow are easily your strongest point but you're good at throwing in random off the wall shit too. The second verse was my favorite, reminded me somewhat of Eminem. Keep at it dude

[Phasewon]

Props for the feed Diva!

[DaPrince]

All three verses were great but the first one stood out to me the most and the opening line immediately caught my attention. Keep droppin and I'll keep reading.

[AntiMaTTer]

i seriously laughed out loud at the "I'm a motherfuckin' cannibal with it, feasting on pets
At the animal clinic, "

was hilarious to me. all verses were real solid and had nice multis and rhyme scheme throughout. itd be nice to have a topical battle against you sometime. word

[Phasewon]

Much respect for the feed, yall.

[Colossus]

Wow beautiful. I can really see the Eminem influence here not just in style but some similar rhymes but all in all is was clean and sick as hell. Smooth flow and beautiful multies.

Maybe not too original though, I think I've heard that chapstick line before.

[Emphamiss Eyecis]

THAT WAS NICE YO! ....THESE LINES I LIKED THE BEST................ The rappin' professor is back for a lecture, slash you and sever
Your back and then measure the fragments in fractions and patch you together
I'm more savage than ever, I massacre better

KEEP HIPHOP ALIVE!! MUCH RESPECT...KEEP IT UP

[TheNobleOne]

this was a dope drop man, havent seen anything bad from you yet. keep doin ya thing.

[IntrinsicCadence]

As far as flow goes this is one of the best pieces I've read in a while. All sorts of multis and internal rhyming really made the words pump their innate music. U stuck with the concept from the beginning to the end, props on that, although I kinda wish the lyrics went somewhere--- like either began to outline an actual story or began to incorporate some more substance as it moved forward or something-- just cuz from the beginning to the end it doesn't really build up, which made me begin to loose interest after I read like half of it. But overall Phase, this is a nice drop, u've got the art of rhythm and rhyme down solid, and u've got some creative use of your words...

If u get a chance, can u drop some feed over here: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/colle ... 18949.html

[QwarterZ]

Damn man, this was a sick piece, I really like the first verse
I don't know what it is about it but the inner and multi's really did the trick
made me say wtf? either way keep writing my dude
I really can't say much cuz I enjoyed this piece...keep doing you!