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Always There
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Always There
dramatic banger in 3/4 time signature
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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Re: Always There
Not bad, it's got a good flow to it, and a real nice mix of instruments, but I'll not feelin the synthy instrument that comes in at around 0:40. The rest of the instruments create a nice atmosphere, just that particular sound doesn't do it for me. The only other suggestion is maybe change up that one short piano loop that plays throughout the whole track, feels like that loop plays at least a hundred times. Other than those two suggestions though, this is a solid beat. I don't like it as much as Up All Night, but still real nice.
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