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Post by Kuhlerblynd »

Man fuck this, Ive been stuck since...
I was born I guess...
Felt like Ive been snuffed, shit like cuffs fit...
On both wrists so evenly...

And why not? Shouldnt they?
Or am I speaking of life's balance we dont hold?
Muthafuckers talk alot of shit man...
But few can stand proud and oh so bold...

Your hand just folds, and you get dealt once again
Once a man... Or a boy... Or just someone that understands...

Lifes cycle...


(Only drop in the poetry section. Not sure if anyone will feel it, so thought I would see...)
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Post by IntrinsicCadence »

I like this man, it's simple but straight to the point and expressive. It's feels like a getting shit off your chest kinda written, when something is weighing on your shoulders.
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Yeah its kinda one of those "I reached my peak and need to fuggin say something" kinda just flows right from your heart and the core of what you are. I like this drop man hope to see some more poems

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Short and sweet. Right to the point. Good message. Good shit overall.
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Post by FlipSide »

Muthafuckers talk alot of shit man...
But few can stand proud and oh so bold...
Mannn i Feel That Like A Fist To The left Titie... Like Most Said It Was Short Simple.. It Also Had Good Structure For Poetry..
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