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Zoo Slaughterin

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Kids Ain't 'A' Class, Dey Ass, Sting Em Like 'B'ees, Cast Away On Da Open 'Seas'
I'm One With The G's, 'F' Em Up, Report Card Kill 'D'ese Niggas Wit Nothin But 'E'ase!!!

Yall Wanna See This Rebel Fight, Ill Travel Light, Nigga I Always Keep The Metal Tight
Ill End The Fight, Smash 'Jack'O-Lantern To Pumpkin Pieces Like Kids On Devils Night!!!

I'll Fuckin Slam This Man, Verse Put Ya In A Hearse, Ya Ever Consider Ta Be A Mic Burner?
Flip Da Script Ta Anigrams, 'Anti' Turn Ta 'Tina' An I'll Body This Ho Like Fucking Ike Turner!!!

Gon See Da Metal Squeeze, Ya Aint Hot With Frees, Faggot Fuck I'll Bet You Fairy
Cuz Between 'U' and 'I', I'll Fuckin 'X' 'Q' OUT Like Former James Bond Secretaries!!!

Dont Needa Gas Herbs, He'll Read His Last Words, Havem 'Blacked Out' Like Passwords
Never Catch A Case, He'll Jus Turn On His Boys N 'rettaM' Out Like His Name Spelt Backwards!!!

Rugges Lore, Dont Bust Slugs At Whores, In Jail Pillow Has Stains Cuz He Fucked It More
Suck N Bore, Add A D N Flip His Name Explains His Jail Stay, Name Turn Ta Drugged N Sore!!!

Ill Fuckin Cover His 'Dome' Like A Tarmak, Take A Blade 2 This Mexican N Scar Fags
See Me Comin And Dart Fast, Way I'd Be Fuckin Up 'Evolution' Ud Think It Was A Car Crash!!!

Calm Ya Nerves, Know Ya Shakin Hand Tremblin U Be Stakin Out How Imma Smash Ya Mouth
Lips Swellin Up Like Haz Contracted Gout, Im Like MayWeather Da Way I'm Scarin 'Paki' Now!!!
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Is this that homo Creative that no one liked? This was almost as bad as watching Soul Plane.
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Re: Zoo Slaughterin

Post by IntrinsicCadence »

Alright, this definitely has got to be someone whose been around the site for awhile. Probably a regular taking on a second name (though unlikely but possibly a lurker who's been floatin around the forums for quite some time). Whoever this is, I think he just called out Jack, Anti (twice), Quix, Ruggs, Evolution and Haz...

I think this is a good verse here, appreciate the nameplay and name flips. Some pretty solid punches, and well done on the personal shots. All in all, solid shit.
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Most Def Someone On The Site... But Who?..... **Plays Jepordy Song**... and why change Ur Name To Take Shots... :violin:
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: Zoo Slaughterin

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This ain't bad I thought the whole letter idea at the start was dope but aside from that it was pretty basic cause ya weak punchlines weighed down the dope ones. Flow was cool I ain't have anythin bad to say bout the way it rhymed or shit. My only advice is makin ya punches hit more personally since it's a diss, sayin 'I'm a X Quix out like whatever' is creative but it's just a threat know what I mean homie? But I ain't know if ya just playin round with folks or have any beef, either way it was solid.
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