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Re: After Hours.

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I would love to drop extensive feed on this tho i am at work right now... THis was A Very Strong Piece. Ur Depiction Of The Afterhours Is So Real I Can See It While U Telling The Story.. From The Trafficking to the coon behind chik a filet to people speeding by in the highways not wanting to stop... I Must say it did remind me of the way people view camden.. Nice Drop ... If i have time i will drop some quotes of the lines that were of effect to me...
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Re: After Hours.

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DAM son... wtf is this man? I don't know why this slipped past me for so long I'm kinda sad I didn't read this earlier... would've given me motivation. Your vocab in this is fresh man. The rhymes kept it real as shit. Stayed on topic. I felt like you were reading it to me, I could see the whole dam thing man. You wanna write movies... DO IT!!! I will go watch ya shit son.

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Jesus dude the imagery on this was brilliant and the picture went great with it, u caught the atmosphere perfectly. I don't wanna break it down cause it doesn't need analyzed or shit, and the last bar was a perfect ending. I had to leave feed on this after reading it.
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I keep wishin you did audio Rugg, you've got such a nice flow in your writing style. I respect that your more into the authorship side of things and not so much into audio processes, but shit man the lyrics are half the path to making a good audio if you ask me...
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Re: After Hours.

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I've read this about 5 times today.. I'm really feeling this drop..

Well put together... Brilliant work...

This is one of the best drops I've read so far..

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