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This my first since 03

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So please comment


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Last edited by FlipSide on Fri Mar 19, 2010 11:33 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: This my first since 03

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yea i know i need a better mic..... and its been since 03 since i wrote anything....this is the first thing ii wrote n jus spit it... so i thought it was ok exept for the quality...which i agree it sucks.... still using cool pro like back in da day...guess im out dated lol...any programs yall recomend?? lemme kno

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http://www.soundclick.com/onmygrind

if u click on this link it sounds more clear....
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Re: This my first since 03

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decent drop minus da quality u had sum good lines on there dat stood out 2 me but my only prob is da quality if da quality was better it would prob be a decent track not a bad one jus da quality keep droppin' man
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I know man... its all i got to work with now...until i get my money right.. but its appreciated. thanks for the feedback...
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Other than the obvious recording quality, this track is real nice. Your flow style matches the best real well, and the feel of the rhythm is laid back but elevated. The lyrics have all sorts of gems within. Lyrically this is one of the best I've heard from you imo.
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Re: This my first since 03

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yea quality definitely takes away from this, the intro could've blended in better, you could definitely make a nasty track with a little touch ups
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Re: This my first since 03

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yeah just a repeat of all but the quality needs touching up badly... you got that voice that could really get a message across and could make a killer track.. beat type was perfect but just like illest has said.. quality took from the track... flow was tight and on point as what i heard.. keep it up flip
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Re: This my first since 03

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Yeah work on the quality. Other than that it was pretty solid. Really good for being your first song in 7 years.
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