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TheNobleOne
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this was pretty nice man. had some flow to it, some of it seemed a little stretched but nice for the most part. also had a lot of wordplay thrown in there. i was diggin it. keep doin ya thing man.
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another dope piece man..had me going with the flow..a lot of lines stood out to me...but that silver spoon line killed it..murdered it..then raped the corpse...sick stuff man lol...a lot of agression with this piece keep writing my dude

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