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World on my shoulders...

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Father, I'm prayin for a friend he and I are pretty close,
and out of all my friends for this one I'm concerned the most,
He say he readin daily but he ain't really learnin,
He been in church but say that he ain't moved by any sermon,
His face weak, he ain't prayed in a week,
he wakes up and just weep with his face in the sink Lord,
you gotta help my man, I'm prayin' for him daily,
he ain't sinned but it just seem as if he goin' crazy,
He say he feelin trapped, can't even head up the mall,
cuz every lady's half-dressed temptin him to lust and fall,
He keep the TV off, videos just make him feel,
that he ain't really nothin without money, girls and shiny wheels,
The other day he told me that he felt less a man, cuz he ain't have a five-year plan or a piece of land,
and man it's crazy cuz his family think so much of him, 
plus he got a wifey whos always showin' love for him, but he's strugglin', 
even though he talk to me, I tell him what to do but he don't listen when he oughta be,
I'm scared for him cuz there's people that look up to him, 
he got some younger siblings who been changed by what he's done for them but is it done for him, 
Lord don't let it be, cuz deres sumthin else hes concealin see,
The person im been talkin bout is really me....

-talent

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this was a pretty nice drop homie. diggin it. i kind of figured you were going to end it that way when i started reading but still a solid verse man. keep doin ya thing and hold ya head up.
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This is Lecrae's Lyrics to his song "Prayin For You".. One of my fav tracks... Im surprised to see some1 actually liking lecrae on here
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Well shit man, u can't be posting up other people's shit and claiming it as your own, that's just straight thievery.

I was first thinking, aiight this ain't bad he's expressing himself well, then Deciple comes in and says this is the lyrics for another song so I checked it out, and these lyrics are exactly the same.

Shit man, this makes me question the credibility of some of your other drops too, some of which I had originally thought were real nice.
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what the....stan?

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