Hollywood

Leeroy Jenkins · Post by **Leeroy Jenkins** » Sat Sep 25, 2010 4:15 pm

Not exactly rap. I just enjoy making different shit

Orfadox · Post by **Orfadox** » Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:06 pm

Dude See For Some Strange Reason I Was Really Feeling That I Didnt Think I Would When It First Started Playing But Shits Good Man

TheNobleOne · Post by **TheNobleOne** » Sun Sep 26, 2010 7:28 am

you get props for just being versatile and doing different types of shit but i wasnt really feelin this personally.

IntrinsicCadence · Post by **IntrinsicCadence** » Sun Sep 26, 2010 3:47 pm

This was good, just not my style. I think that if it had been a bit more of a mixture of rapping and singing it would have been real ill. Your singing voice and rapping voice compliment each other well, so after a minute or so of singing I was hoping you'd burst in with a rapid flow, then slow back up to singing again later. But for what it was this was well done man.

Leeroy Jenkins · Post by **Leeroy Jenkins** » Mon Sep 27, 2010 2:48 am

Yeah due to the mixed reviews I've got on this, I think I can try to make it better somehow. Maybe I'll add a verse after the falsetto part at like 0:46

then go into the chorus after that

I'm just trying to get an idea of what's wrong with the track so to speak so I can fix it lol. I personally like the song and wanna use it on my album but if I can pin point the problem and make it better I will

IntrinsicCadence · Post by **IntrinsicCadence** » Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:21 am

I think a rapped verse at 0:46 or after you sing 'hollywood' a few times u could insert a verse at like 1:06 I think it was. Before you put this on your CD you'll also need to record at better quality, but I'm sure you already know that, your voice clips a few times. I'd say the rapped verse doesn't even need to be long, but it needs to be at a bit of a faster pace than the part you have now where you currently kinda like talk for a short period of time.

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Mon Sep 27, 2010 10:26 am

this was different... love the beat its simple but nice not all up in ur face... i think you did a good job on it... i would lighten up on the flanger on "hollywood"... its a lil too much IMO... the harmonies weren't bad... nor was the singin... overall i think u did a pretty good job on this...

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:56 pm

i was expecting a little rap thrown in, overall this wasn't that bad, it was kinda entertaining, some parts could've been done better but definitely nice to see rap is not your own area in audio

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