Take it..

[talent401]

Okay,i kno u missed me..but i always cum bakk like chucky,
u must b dyin from tetanus cuz ur ryhmes is rusty,
i go hard all day sorta like viagra,
just ask ur mom i tell her legs to "abre"wit out da "kadabra",
BuT see dis is sorta simple cuz im nice lyrically wit versatility,
My ability would have da weather change to -100 wit a slight chance of humidity,
Cuz my flow is critically insane
Ill stop murderin wen my list reaches infinity
Cuz Physically my capibality is to far fetched for ur dumbinity,
Yea,so in utha words im just lettin u kno was up,
basically im real and ur fake like da last word i made up,
I aint dissin ne1 dis da warrior speakin freely,
i make new hits while u make remixes to amillie,
in utha words every1 duz its really nuttin new sorry no cred,
im goin to hard to stop now...dats wat He said....



-Talent

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[TheNobleOne]

i would suggest that you try to spell correctly when you write your ryhmes. when you say thing like "dis" is kind of throws of the reading of the piece. flow was aite and you had some punches but they werent nothing special. keep doin ya thing man. holla

[pablo1212]

Wasn't your best drop , but you had a couple of good lines their..

"i go hard all day sorta like viagra,
just ask ur mom i tell her legs to "abre"wit out da "kadabra","

lmaoo dope as line !

Keep writing.