Get Up (Free verse)

[TheNobleOne]

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this was a track i did to the 50 cent beat when it came out. just a 24 bar exercise. let me know what yall think.

[Lawgix]

not bad...

[TheNobleOne]

appreciate it

[Momeijah]

Lol I love the original song and beat, u shoulda put a hook in there man. Anyway this was cool u got good mic presence, didn't sound unnatural or shit. Flow was good but there are a couple of rests u took between words that I wouldn't agree with, kinda disrupted shit for me for a sec, but that's a minor issue, track was still nice.

[RedRacRecords]

You got flow. I like your sound. "You got a problem with a ..." you kinda mubbled that cant make it all out. "I'm carving out a ??? out your chest peice" could really make that out either. Lyrically its a decent 24 thou.

[TheNobleOne]

i appreciate the feed fellas. i prolly should post lyrics with the songs lol

you got a problem with the bar then raise it up

and


im carving "I love noble" on ya chest piece

[1 !LL B!tch]

Quality was most noticable to me but the overall song was pretty !LL you got a good flow and rhymes were also good, it was a good little drop, your voice sounds like ILL BILL with less rhymes, it was good, proud of you!

[NoVeL]

You Happened To Use A Bar From My Latest Song, Now I Gotta Go Back To The Lab LOL. Flow Was Decent & Punches Hit Their Target. Work On Your Delivery & BREATHE Then You'll Be A God!

[TheNobleOne]

thanks ill bitch, appreciate the feed.

and yeah creative when i did this piece i was smokin a lot of weed and having problems with my throat and also my breath control. appreciate the feed though man.

[Evans]

Pretty nice, your flow is on point, only constructive criticism I can think of really would be to use multi syllables etc. but overall its dope!

[Flowetry]

I love it homie, hook me up with some more of these brotha you are sick.