Still....

[QwarterZ]

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=muGuYaw7VGs[/video]
Motivated by the hatred more then the love
most talented writer still ain't generate a buzz
MC's act like they can't give a young'n some love
what the fuck....bouncin' in Caddys is the mission
always bitching, talkin' bout a daddy that was missin'
not me, then again I gotta Bi-Polar position
two broads stuck in neutral, the motor is missin'
get it? well if not we gotta mutual agreement
talk smart, your face will cruise through the cement
honestly that'll put a little more then bruises to ya reasons
why talk gully behind a board? it's useful as competing
for a belt that I could boast on boards like I'm the best
y'all rather hear bout dumb broads I'd carress
or try to demean my verse and see if my multi's might connect
ride with a tech, not a gun stupid to fix my computing
I'm typing at a unrelated speed, ripping some shit
till I make these rhymes go together like kissing cousins
the fuck I need to do a track for so they can rip it apart
Rap became a buncha a babies to the point I'm sick of the art
buncha cowardly lions it's obvious they missing they hearts
treat it like below the belt punches, I'ma be flipping the bars
drowning in my own sorrow, nah fuck that I ain't paid
plus wasting money to be sick? the fuck? that ain't great
clean up my act in rehab? the fuck homey I ain't made...
get it? well fuck it, I ain't gonna go any further....
till word get's around how you sunk into a nerd or...
somethin' other, leave em Bun son, down south with the burner
I'm too ill to be underrated but dumb down for the sake of gettin' read
like a young blood, so I break MC rhymes down and segment the rest
shoot the breeze with a million flows but keep shootin' blanks
so I gotta keep going the same direction, call it Hoobastank
no matter, I can overflow and keep every single newcomer running
ink my heart and soul into the pad just like a womans monthly
who can confront me, say he wack when people know he the most consistent
want to see a more deprived me? go back in time and see whose persistent
my best work overlooked, they turnin' stones without seein' medusa
think they got me beat, funny cuz I ain't never seen them bein' producers
I don't need each thought to prove who can kick it off in the weed spot
want to see another hit but got a better chance waiting for Detox...

[Soulo]

eh... 4/10

[QwarterZ]

................lulz

this isn't elementary nukka

[Danyo]

This is nice dude

I'm too ill to be underrated but dumb down for the sake of gettin' read
like a young blood, so I break MC rhymes down and segment the rest
shoot the breeze with a million flows but keep shootin' blanks

I feel the same way.

Keep it up man, who cares what others have to say like their some respected critic or something.

[QwarterZ]

word brah...thanx for peepin'

[talent401]

Overall good verse da intesity was dere....punclines were good but sum were kinda blah seems like u can do way better...never get lazy on ur
Bars!..go strong from top to bottom...but nicee..stay up..and keep ritin!

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[TheNobleOne]

try layin it down homie