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Omega Bill vs Knowmad

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5 bars.

House Rules.

Due: He can say when he checks when he can drop. Not gonna rush him, being we're both pressed for time.

This is my check though.
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Re: Omega Bill vs Knowmad

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look at this meathead...

i'll destroy him and win, leave him with only the choice to "get thin"
cuz dude's only "gettin big or blowin up" when doing 'roids at the gym

so you aint battled me yet, but heres a reality "check"
ppl rap to these texts... n dont "pay bills any attention" like his salarys less

alpha's the best? man my text
will leave you manic depressed
i'll have you lookin like ya avy: .... dazed confused n crossin ya hands on ya chest

you're like the big white guy at the party people try to get to rap
just entertained by fat preps rappin, THAT'S why they smile at yo ass

but how you got 21 wins, meathead, ya fuckin 'brain' doesn't run
you just win your 'battles' by tryna 'muscle' ya way to the front
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Re: Omega Bill vs Knowmad

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Ill fucking 'chew' you up and spit you out, not grizzly, thats my red man talkin
Battling me with ur skill level u livin up to ya track named "Dead Man Wakin"

Efforts are valiant, but left with no balance, get a deal? he wont hear that call
Because truth is in fear he stalls, and he's blind to talent like he cant SEE-AT-ALL

Dudes memo is whack, stays back like a democrat, he wont emerge to live
Hes from washington, but he cant "stop this bill" like a fucking conservative!

I near left, back with a vengeance, u sob on ya queer sets no wonder y hos hate ya
I wanted to face a battler but instead got a fuckin whack Rob Dyrdek with rosacea!*

I can listen to how your shit fades, he dont spit blades, swerves with a fast steer
And this bitch wont have the "EDGE" in a win like the fuckin Seahawks last year!

*http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3YdGlD3g ... r_embedded
- http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rosacea

All other punches: He's from Seattle. Edgerrin James played for Seahawks.
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Reason: spelled rosacea wrong
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Re: Omega Bill vs Knowmad

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Punches: Bill
Personals: Bill
Wordplay: Bill
Nameplay: ---
Multies: Knowmad
Flow: Knowmad

Bills verse was weaker than usual but Knowmad wasn't really throwing any punches. And the ones he did throw were weak or played. Knowmad got the multies and flow pretty easily but that doesn't win battles by itself.

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Re: Omega Bill vs Knowmad

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

alright billy boy, im assuming this is what you wanted me to leave feed or whatever? i really don't know but yea...took the time out to check this


KNOWMAD -

i'll destroy him and win, leave him with only the choice to "get thin"
cuz dude's only "gettin big or blowin up" when doing 'roids at the gym

3.0 nice rhymescheme, decent pun

so you aint battled me yet, but heres a reality "check"
ppl rap to these texts... n dont "pay bills any attention" like his salarys less

3.0 another played pun, still decent, rhymscheme was koo

alpha's the best? man my text will leave you manic depressed
i'll have you lookin like ya avy: .... dazed confused n crossin ya hands on ya chest

2.0 weak pun just stating the obvious for a personal, decent rhymescheme

you're like the big white guy at the party people try to get to rap
just entertained by fat preps rappin, THAT'S why they smile at yo ass

0.5 your worse bar.. i hate it lol

but how you got 21 wins, meathead, ya fuckin 'brain' doesn't run
you just win your 'battles' by tryna 'muscle' ya way to the front

2.5 decent rhymescheme and pun

score:11



OMEGA BILL -

Ill fucking 'chew' you up and spit you out, not grizzly, thats my red man talkin
Battling me with ur skill level u livin up to ya track named "Dead Man Wakin"

1.5 ehh..not feelin this much at all..alright personal

Efforts are valiant, but left with no balance, get a deal? he wont hear that call
Because truth is in fear he stalls, and he's blind to talent like he cant SEE-AT-ALL

2.5 played out seattle wordplay but still counts as a decent pun and personal, rhymescheme was koo

Dudes memo is whack, stays back like a democrat, he wont emerge to live
Hes from washington, but he cant "stop this bill" like a fucking conservative!

2.5 self boasting..nice, rhymescheme was alright at most, the yelling didn't do much for me in this

I near left, back with a vengeance, u sob on ya queer sets no wonder y hos hate ya
I wanted to face a battler but instead got a fuckin whack Rob Dyrdek with rosacea!*

1.5 ...not feelin this, felt a bit stretched for the pun, weak filler too

I can listen to how your shit fades, he dont spit blades, swerves with a fast steer
And this bitch wont have the "EDGE" in a win like the fuckin Seahawks last year!

3.0 personally my favorite bar, the filler had a decent rhymescheme, nothin too impressive but overall this was a nice punch

score:11


lol..that was pure coincidence you both ended up with the same score, i thought breaking it down would've helped figure this out..

punches:knowmad
personals:bill
flow:knowmad

vote: knowmad

personally.. this was a really close battle, i could honestly see how bill would win, problem is that i was entertained by knowmad, punches that lack a rhymescheme just don't cut it for me, bill was more consistent, had it not been for that one bar i hated by knowmad this would've been easier to decide, bill had the best bar in this battle imo. but i still felt like the fillers took way too much away in your verse particularly..good battle guys
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Re: Omega Bill vs Knowmad

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Punches: Bill
Personals: Bill
Wordplay: Knowmad
Nameplay: Knowmad
Multies: Knowmad
Flow: Knowmad
complexity: Tie
enjoyment: Bill
overall: Knowmad

Too fucking close, you both came hella tough in this battle, but Knowmad's wordplay and over all nameplay ... translated in to nice personal punches.

vote: Knowmad
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Re: Omega Bill vs Knowmad

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i'll destroy him and win, leave him with only the choice to "get thin"
cuz dude's only "gettin big or blowin up" when doing 'roids at the gym
personal, cool multis some syllables were off, the GETTING big was a good flip i think

so you aint battled me yet, but heres a reality "check"
ppl rap to these texts... n dont "pay bills any attention" like his salarys less
man this could have been stellar, it was almost there it just didnt hit quite like i hope it would, good rhyme and nother nice flip thouhg

alpha's the best? man my text will leave you manic depressed
i'll have you lookin like ya avy: .... dazed confused n crossin ya hands on ya chest
personal but its not really like "dissing him"

you're like the big white guy at the party people try to get to rap
just entertained by fat preps rappin, THAT'S why they smile at yo ass
falling off

but how you got 21 wins, meathead, ya fuckin 'brain' doesn't run
you just win your 'battles' by tryna 'muscle' ya way to the front
yeaa that was a nice closer, i was diggin it

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Ill fucking 'chew' you up and spit you out, not grizzly, thats my red man talkin
Battling me with ur skill level u livin up to ya track named "Dead Man Wakin"
personal and a good openr, nice rhyme etc

Efforts are valiant, but left with no balance, get a deal? he wont hear that call
Because truth is in fear he stalls, and he's blind to talent like he cant SEE-AT-ALL
lol pretty witty i likd it, nice multi usage

Dudes memo is whack, stays back like a democrat, he wont emerge to live
Hes from washington, but he cant "stop this bill" like a fucking conservative!
lol best line so far
I near left, back with a vengeance, u sob on ya queer sets no wonder y hos hate ya
I wanted to face a battler but instead got a fuckin whack Rob Dyrdek with rosacea!*
[/b]lol nice[/b]

I can listen to how your shit fades, he dont spit blades, swerves with a fast steer
And this bitch wont have the "EDGE" in a win like the fuckin Seahawks last year!
eh im not crazy bout it but it was pretty good

PUNCHS-Bill
MULTI-BILL (his were cleaner)
WORDPLY-TIE
PERSONALS-TIE
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Re: Omega Bill vs Knowmad

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Aight, the breakdown...


Knowmad's Verse

i'll destroy him and win, leave him with only the choice to "get thin"
cuz dude's only "gettin big or blowin up" when doing 'roids at the gym

I like the multi. Nice opener. Flowed smooth. Punchline was good, but couldve got a little more creative. This was a good opener tho.

so you aint battled me yet, but heres a reality "check"
ppl rap to these texts... n dont "pay bills any attention" like his salarys less

I liked the concept, but the wording of this seemed to be slightly off. No hate on your wordplay tho. I like how you incorporated that.

alpha's the best? man my text will leave you manic depressed
i'll have you lookin like ya avy: .... dazed confused n crossin ya hands on ya chest

This was fucking nice. No complaints.

you're like the big white guy at the party people try to get to rap
just entertained by fat preps rappin, THAT'S why they smile at yo ass

This wasnt really hard hitting IMO

but how you got 21 wins, meathead, ya fuckin 'brain' doesn't run
you just win your 'battles' by tryna 'muscle' ya way to the front

Once again, not as hard hitting as I would want to see. You have the flow down pat fam. No doubt about it. Multi's are always on time and you transition smoothly. Its just that your punches dont seem to delivery the way you are wanting them too. Keep at it tho bro. You will find your nitch.


Bill's verse

Ill fucking 'chew' you up and spit you out, not grizzly, thats my red man talkin
Battling me with ur skill level u livin up to ya track named "Dead Man Wakin"

Nice personal, punch, and wordplay. Very solid opener Bill.

Efforts are valiant, but left with no balance, get a deal? he wont hear that call
Because truth is in fear he stalls, and he's blind to talent like he cant SEE-AT-ALL

Okay, I liked the concept, but for some reason it didnt hit hard for me. My opinion. However, I do like how you referenced more than one way of being handi-capped. That was cool.

Dudes memo is whack, stays back like a democrat, he wont emerge to live
Hes from washington, but he cant "stop this bill" like a fucking conservative!

This was fucking nice. Kinda a hype line, but I like how you delivered with the wordplay.

I near left, back with a vengeance, u sob on ya queer sets no wonder y hos hate ya
I wanted to face a battler but instead got a fuckin whack Rob Dyrdek with rosacea!*

IMO this was a very cool concept. Im always down to see something fresh. Not sure your set up was as effective as could be tho.

I can listen to how your shit fades, he dont spit blades, swerves with a fast steer
And this bitch wont have the "EDGE" in a win like the fuckin Seahawks last year!

Nice punch, but your closer could have been harder IMO.


Bottom line, Bill was more consistant with his punches and they just seemed to land with more conviction. Ups to both emcees here tho, as I enjoyed reading the battle. Hope to see more drops from each.

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i'll destroy him and win, leave him with only the choice to "get thin"
cuz dude's only "gettin big or blowin up" when doing 'roids at the gym

2/5 basic concept played well, rhymes/flow nice

so you aint battled me yet, but heres a reality "check"
ppl rap to these texts... n dont "pay bills any attention" like his salarys less

3/5 I got but OMG worded better couldv'e went harder

alpha's the best? man my text will leave you manic depressed
i'll have you lookin like ya avy: .... dazed confused n crossin ya hands on ya chest

2/5 personal was there but aint really bang him

you're like the big white guy at the party people try to get to rap
just entertained by fat preps rappin, THAT'S why they smile at yo ass

1/5 this bar was burnt out boo boo, nothing hit

but how you got 21 wins, meathead, ya fuckin 'brain' doesn't run
you just win your 'battles' by tryna 'muscle' ya way to the front

2/5 I see you getting personal but nothing much more

10 points



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Ill fucking 'chew' you up and spit you out, not grizzly, thats my red man talkin
Battling me with ur skill level u livin up to ya track named "Dead Man Wakin"

2/5 personal punches are good couldv'e been better

Efforts are valiant, but left with no balance, get a deal? he wont hear that call
Because truth is in fear he stalls, and he's blind to talent like he cant SEE-AT-ALL

2/5 I was leaning on 3 but 1st line was mad filler boy

Dudes memo is whack, stays back like a democrat, he wont emerge to live
Hes from washington, but he cant "stop this bill" like a fucking conservative!

4/5 that went hard, I liked the connection in both lines

I near left, back with a vengeance, u sob on ya queer sets no wonder y hos hate ya
I wanted to face a battler but instead got a fuckin whack Rob Dyrdek with rosacea!*

2/5 that wa funny technically not much but made me lol

I can listen to how your shit fades, he dont spit blades, swerves with a fast steer
And this bitch wont have the "EDGE" in a win like the fuckin Seahawks last year!

1/5 I guess it was personal but not feelin the closer boo

11 points and the battle was so close

Personals went to OMEGA I think his was every so he got it
Flow was took up by KNOWMAD, but it was close n stuff
Punches had to fall out to OMEGA, good battle boys!


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Re: Omega Bill vs Knowmad

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Personals- Omega
Flow- Knowmad
Punches- Knowmad

Omega came hard, but the enjoyability, structure, and cleverness of Knowmad's verse took it.

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Re: Omega Bill vs Knowmad

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Having being opened for 2 weeks:

Winner: Omega Bill

Good battle, Knowmad. I'll openly admit I underestimated you.

I'll give you a re-match soon if you'd like where hopefully we can get more voters.

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