Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

Wonderland

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

Post Reply
User avatar
Blackstar_II
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 2
Joined: Mon Sep 13, 2010 11:01 am

Wonderland

Post by Blackstar_II »

Twince inna-lifetime (backing) "Wonderland" (alternate backing-magnetic arts)

Just a little something ive been working on recently

never never know why i take it slow
but then i flip it round and its good to go
A side B side they both play well
Like a game of monopoly its all about the sell
cuttin yo prices so a brother can eat
but why cut yo proces when a brother cant sleep
to much on his mind the worry n the blood
his baby mama, his cash flo and the hood
And life goes slow, with little direction
and you keep your head down with little detection
you look at yourself n ue dnt know where to go
n the people suggest u go with the flow

but you say NO i dont want to do that!
I'm'a follow that white rabbit, the one with the hat,
down to wonderland where the dreams come true
money grows on trees n theres enough hope for you
where all the girls are called mary jane
n they got sexy bodies that'll drive you insane
they also got tha capacity to make you high
just by looking at you, eye to eye.

Whats he know about the hood, his skin is white
its a matter of context, i write what i write
flowing from my fingers, damn that kids bright
and his lyrics shine with power and with might
maybe even gods, but who heres religious
maybe even gods, these lyrics are prodigious
Cant contain it, cant keep it under wraps
gonna need to chill, maybe wrap some daps

Wasnt so long ago that we was young blood
heads full of ideas, and the discovery of bud
life stretched before us. like the PA highway
and when i sing rhymes i always do it my way
sometimes u cant think of the words to say
then u look at the sky and see the light of day
then u feel all your troubles just fade away.....fade away fade away


So just like black star and the mighty mos def
im'a gunna be writing rhymes up unitl my death
but most of them dont get spoke they remain on the paper
but who knows maybe ill re-visit them later
cause its when november comes, just like gorillaz
thinking of words n creating the floor fillers
who says its hard to create lines that rhyme
bitches, it so easy I do it to pass the time
just like a crossword or a sudoku
girl you so fine i just want know you

we like transformers, cause we in our prime,
n the divide between law n crime is a fine line
bubble bee and smokescreen are passing a blunt
we got a choice of smokes, whatever you want
one of thems buzzin n the other cant see
n u thinkin life is a crazy place to be
true say, it is, but you your own master
n if u want to be, u can be a rap-star
writing own rhymes, page after page
then you mercing it when u up on tha stage

Now lets get back to the meaningful things
No dotted line, sub-clause or attached strings
Life is made for living, and i like what i see
get yo pens and take a message from me
the voice oh hip hop rings loud and true
Even when the lyrics are shiny and new
just like the lambo thats in my garage
well, maybe not now....but i aim for the stars.
Write what you write, whenever the right feels right
User avatar
QwarterZ
Rap Professional
Offline
Posts: 1688
Joined: Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:01 am
Wins: 4
Losses: 9

Re: Wonderland

Post by QwarterZ »

Damn man, this was dope as hell
I'm diggin' the beginnin, that first segment
that was nice, really in touch with life
really nice use of this concept though
I would of tried this, but I didn't feel it in me
but you really took the concept and ran with it
put yourself in the story and mixed it together
dope flow, the transitioning kept it flowing fluently
the whole vibe was smooth...nice work...


Whats he know about the hood, his skin is white
its a matter of context, i write what i write
flowing from my fingers, damn that kids bright
and his lyrics shine with power and with might
maybe even gods, but who heres religious
maybe even gods, these lyrics are prodigious
Cant contain it, cant keep it under wraps
gonna need to chill, maybe wrap some daps

^^^^^^^^that's dope man, I'd quote more but yea
you know what it is man, keep writing!
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 6 guests