Noble Vs. F*ckUup

[TheNobleOne]

sorry it took me so long to get this going


5 votes to win
no feeding
no bullshit

i guess we can do about 14-16 bars? if thats cool. i will probably wind up posting my verse up sometime next week, if you are done before then just let me know or post your verse or whateva.

[Fuck u up!]

Yep, due whenever you're ready.

[TheNobleOne]

im working on mine now it shouldnt be too long man.

-- Tue Sep 14, 2010 2:25 pm --

this dude is trippin if he even thought he can spar with me
I spit ruthless shit at bitches like U and start the beef
lets be truthful kid, in the streets you play the part of geek
more like a target, i got a gang of cavemen that will spark the heat
hes the kind of kat to be shook in fights, wack faggot ass pussy type
see if you had swag this is what your raps could be like
i dont mean to be snub but you aint livin as a drug dealer or street thug
this weak fuck could go to a kids karate class and get beat up!
and son if you mean mug i might have to smack a rapper phony
maybe clap you homie, cuz ill stuff shells in ya grill like macaroni
ima set em straight, ill defeat you and the lame who writes ya shit
noble wont hesitate to put 7 in ya chest like your name was michael vick
and i sit back and ask myself questions like, "dawg is this fair"?
i will put a crucifix thru this bitch cuz we all got crosses to bear
my style is awesome and rare, to be honest you should just stop it
and this dude will only touch a gun because you get to "cock it"

i just keyed that shit up homie

do ya thing

-- Wed Sep 15, 2010 1:46 am --

I thought you was ready man, lets get this crackin.

[Fuck u up!]

N = Nitrogen on the periodic table is #7
N = Nas's CD Cover


Ok..

I sling shot text to the noggin-
D Menace when the mentals not joggin...

^felt like it cause F U's on some WAR ish for the Prize
choppem up n' leave him the Noble Piece prize, no lies

I can see the bitch in'em swinging fists his Frames Glass
n' Ima lighter the way ima blow Nitrogen up like Chemistry class
N's number 7 on bar seven peep the wordplay break ya back mind
this is my numeral story the way I'ma make 7 eat a Nine *clap*
^if that was over ya head O well, lets get this established
noble! Anal sex with a fruit basket doesnt make you Bananas
ComprendE? cause I just wanna key screw you lames
I'll put a gat up ya ass pull it n' leave you SHYT FOR BRAINS
^Quiet a picture-
n' The Noble one's getting murked like generic movie
cause F U'll open N up like I purchased Nas's CD

Sling shot shyt.

[Quix]

this dude is trippin if he even thought he can spar with me
I spit ruthless shit at bitches like U and start the beef
lets be truthful kid, in the streets you play the part of geek
more like a target, i got a gang of cavemen that will spark the heat

ummm was that supposed tah be a punch?? umm no .. Not feeling it ... flow was there tho

4/10 .. had two bars in there 5 per bar


hes the kind of kat to be shook in fights, wack faggot ass pussy type
see if you had swag this is what your raps could be like

ok, getting better, but why not diss the guy instead of trying tah hype yourself??

2/5


i dont mean to be snub but you aint livin as a drug dealer or street thug
this weak fuck could go to a kids karate class and get beat up!

haha funny bar! not the hardest but nice. 3.5/5

and son if you mean mug i might have to smack a rapper phony
maybe clap you homie, cuz ill stuff shells in ya grill like macaroni

pretty tuff bar but no .... rapper phoney?? forced much? 2/5

ima set em straight, ill defeat you and the lame who writes ya shit
noble wont hesitate to put 7 in ya chest like your name was michael vick

Meh, dah whole number on dah shest thing is pretty played! 2.5/5 flowed nice tho

and i sit back and ask myself questions like, "dawg is this fair"?
i will put a crucifix thru this bitch cuz we all got crosses to bear

ok nice shit .. but not directed at your opponent ... flow was there tho nothing special but there ... 2.5/5

my style is awesome and rare, to be honest you should just stop it
and this dude will only touch a gun because you get to "cock it"

**shakking head*** no no no ... not feeling this at all. Weak closer!

1.5/5

16/30



sling shot text to the noggin-
D Menace when the mentals not joggin...

sorry man , this won't cut it...diss your opponent at every chance

1/5


^felt like it cause F U's on some WAR ish for the Prize
choppem up n' leave him the Noble Piece prize, no lies

flow was there, No punch. 1.5/5

I can see the bitch in'em swinging fists his Frames Glass
n' Ima lighter the way ima blow Nitrogen up like Chemistry class

multies a lil off, but i felt yah flow, and more direct. 3/5

N's number 7 on bar seven peep the wordplay break ya back mind
this is my numeral story the way I'ma make 7 eat a Nine *clap*

haha, 2/5

^if that was over ya head O well, lets get this established
noble! Anal sex with a fruit basket doesnt make you Bananas

haha comedian ass fukuh, hit him harder tho ... not very efective ... 2/5

ComprendE? cause I just wanna key screw you lames
I'll put a gat up ya ass pull it n' leave you SHYT FOR BRAINS
^Quiet a picture-

pretty played concept ... worded decent. 1.5/5

n' The Noble one's getting murked like generic movie
cause F U'll open N up like I purchased Nas's CD

multi's were off ... punch was so so. 2.5/5

13/30


Vote: Nobleone, barely

whoa ... closer than i thought mr Nobleone.



If your looking for an easy win ... pick Quix he's fucking garbage! by the way ... care to battle?

[Ambiguous Realm]

lol 2 hours isn't exactly considered a key, i cypher better lines in my sleep but watever atleast this wasn't as boring as i expected



i'll cut to the chase.. fuck u up, as usual.. u always have a good concept for a great punch, but u gotta work on connecting it better, your rhymescheme is probably your biggest downfall, it loses the readers interest imo.

nobleone, rhymescheme was choppy, this looked like a key basically lol, not going to judge that though, lacked the punches, but overall your verse was more effective,


VOTE: noble


fuck, just like i've said to many other members of the site when they rack up losses, don't let it discourage you, i'm sure many of us have lost battles before we got anywhere...keep workin on it

[IntrinsicCadence]

Punches- Noble
Personals- Tie (neither had any really)
Flow- Noble

Overall- Noble

Both these verses were really general, didn't really pack any punches directly at the opponent, just kinda punching the air.
Noble, you had a decent flow, and there were some decent lines here and there, wasn't bad but seemed too similar to a lot of shit spit by a lot of battle rappers out there, not much creativity.
Fuu, your verse just never really did anything, it was just kinda there-- the flow was hard to follow, and the punches were so loosely connected, they practically just fell apart. Fuu, you've got some decent ideas here and there, but lack the follow through to make it really do shit.
But both of ya'll ain't bad, and if you just work on a couple things could be pretty damn good battlers...

[Kau the Lion]

FU had some creative punches that just couldn't connect because of wording. You need to work on that rhyme scheme. Established and bananas do not rhyme as far as I'm concerned. Noble had a nice flow but lacked creativity entirely in his punches. Most of his lines were just straight disses and the few that were punches weren't directed at FU in anyway shape or form. Since punches on both sides really lacked I'm gonna have to give this to Noble for holding down the flow.

+1 Noble

[TheNobleOne]

quix cant even tell what a punch is lol

hes like "that crucifix line wasnt directed towards him" lol wtf were you reading?


either way good battle F U

4-0 me

[Fuck u up!]

Ok So when I signed up I told myself I wasn't gonna reply to much, but Gah!!

What ya'll are telling me is that I can't take the win cause I don't type my shyt like its AUDIO- Fuk that! The rhyme scheme ya'll want (and that I see ya'll like) is some Doctor Sues Shyt!! Yes! its an easier read....
I aint getting defensive or mad I'm just saying, cause the way I sling my Keys tweeks ya head its not a nursery rhyme uhg! I guess its the English/literary major in me... I just log on look! Type Leave! I do audio, but don't got time to waste like that Textings in n out!

[Lawgix]

if Noble wins u always have an option to challenge it... and it will get re-voted...

[Kau the Lion]

Ok So when I signed up I told myself I wasn't gonna reply to much, but Gah!!

What ya'll are telling me is that I can't take the win cause I don't type my shyt like its AUDIO- Fuk that! The rhyme scheme ya'll want (and that I see ya'll like) is some Doctor Sues Shyt!! Yes! its an easier read....
I aint getting defensive or mad I'm just saying, cause the way I sling my Keys tweeks ya head its not a nursery rhyme uhg! I guess its the English/literary major in me... I just log on look! Type Leave! I do audio, but don't got time to waste like that Textings in n out!

Wanna see some Dr. Suess shit(shyt)?

I sling shot text to the noggin-
D Menace when the mentals not joggin...

noggin and joggin barely qualifies as multi-syllabic

^felt like it cause F U's on some WAR ish for the Prize
choppem up n' leave him the Noble Piece prize, no lies

Prize and Lies? Nothing blowing me away here.

I can see the bitch in'em swinging fists his Frames Glass
n' Ima lighter the way ima blow Nitrogen up like Chemistry class

Glass and class... seems like a step down from your first bar.

N's number 7 on bar seven peep the wordplay break ya back mind
this is my numeral story the way I'ma make 7 eat a Nine *clap*

Not sure if the word clap is supposed to be read there. Could be like a backwards multie. Clap nine. Back mind. Other wise it's just nine and mind.

^if that was over ya head O well, lets get this established
noble! Anal sex with a fruit basket doesnt make you Bananas

There is no rhyme in this bar at all as far as I can tell. Dr. Suess got one on you here.

ComprendE? cause I just wanna key screw you lames
I'll put a gat up ya ass pull it n' leave you SHYT FOR BRAINS

Brains and lames. Single syllables again.

n' The Noble one's getting murked like generic movie
cause F U'll open N up like I purchased Nas's CD

Movie and CD don't really rhyme. They have the long e sound at the end but again that's basic shit that's diminished even further by the first syllable in each word.

Just wanna see Fuck elevate like Aerosmith. (Love in an Elevator!)

[Fuck u up!]

^^Swing and a Miss...

. . lawgix I don't care to dispute anything I don't care enough to- just wanted to get that out there cause its madd!!! odd feels weird specially when I know (you can say feel) have a better thought up verse. but yea!! its all in opinion and mental grooming.

[TheNobleOne]

i dont have a problem with fuck so i dont know whats going on here


but considering the rules yall go by this is all freeposting which deserves an automatic L right? lol

-- Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:06 am --

im going to take that as a W if thats cool with fuck

[Ambiguous Realm]

we'll its first to 5 votes, but technically.. this is done and over with, i'm sure fuck u up would agree..

fuck if you got a problem just pm me and i'll re-open this for the rest of the voting



noble wins 4-0 (battle closed and records updated)