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No time like the present

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Written to Drake's "9am Freestyle"

Is ready for my destiny to come, I'm so tired of waiting
my baby is the angel on my shoulder, telling me "patience.
It'll come true honey, like a prophesy"
and she'll be there in the end, for that she pinky promised me.

And with that promise, the foreshadowing is evident
When it's all said and done this note will be the evidence.
But once it's destroyed I escape without cop in sight
Yeah I'mma kill it all, bad company's the reason you're up at night.

Remember the days, baby, when life was just a summer breeze?
then poisonous girls came along provoking and infecting me.
I'm better now, though...take a look at my vitals
I toot my own horn, all are welcome to my recital.

The epitome of fresh air you can catch me close to the clouds
Shooting for the stars at supersonic, I mean the speed of sound.
But clowns with those painted frowns wanna see my plans averted
But I blew up...In paradise, now where's my 40 virgins?

I guess they don't want me to have it, so I wreak havoc
see the weight of the world on my shoulders, I call it simple baggage.
Pilgrim's progress, I choose to leave it all at your feet
which is interesting cause I'm slowly climbing to the top, while the lazy sleep.

So listen...I'm on a mission
you feel me? Good, cause I'm itching,
to let this verse ride...
Tinted windows so that the curious can't see what's inside.

Mysterioso with an enigmatic approach to life
maybe that's the reason people ask how I can choose a wife
At such a young age...I'm a young sage in the making
now I'm heading to the highway of success like my face is on the pavement.

Love whatever is true and the pursuit of it even more
I'm flowing on this ish, go 'head and grab an oar.
Cause we about to chase the green all over the seven seas
And once I plant seeds, try and laugh at my forest of money trees.

Suppose it's true I work hard for next to nothing
and I'm in my room while the cool kids are out clubbing.
But when dividends get paid and I'm in the gain
it'd look like a hurricane if i choose to let it rain.

Since I'm stingy with it, you'll never know i'm practically growing grass
I see most of 'em jealous, it's my job to make it last.
If that's a subliminal hint at the presence of present success
Ask yourself why my company's number has a Vegas address.

Don't read into it, you'll get caught in between the lines like it's pong on full screen
I'm running it now, but had to pause because of a pulled string
Now I'm back on it, I'm an addict that never got enough
at least when I overdose on liquid assets, my family will have enough.

I'm currently stuck on an non-offensive way to end it,
the game is about to be on lock, I gave it a life sentence.
The judge, jury, and executioner, you can call my swagger "vintage."
I guess being known internationally is just by product of being independent.
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Re: No time like the present

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This was dope man, I don't know how you flowed on it
but you really kept it good as far as text goes
the whole vibe you gave off was like a reflective moment
which I enjoyed, you took it upon yourself to express some things
put things into perspective and write it on out, very nice work my dude
I can't say much, just hope you going to put this in audio
I see a buncha dudes that got shit that might sound good in audio
your one of them, keep writing duke!
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Re: No time like the present

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Dammit I Just Wrote Extensive feed to this Piece and Had Like Ten Quotes Then I Had To Sign In N Lost it...So Here is The Short Version.... This Was Dope Dude.. I Mean Its Like A Distilled Drop That Belongs In The Writtens... Nice Metaphores In There And People Could Talk About Ohh Multies n Flow.. But This Was Written Well in My Eyes... Kept Me Interested The Whole Way.. Looking Forward for More Drops...Holla!
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