jokerswild vs rugged eros

[jokerswild]

6 bars checkn in

[jokerswild]

Rugged Eros - Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:51 am
Like on Office Space, he'll be doing "5 years in the Pound Me In The Ass Facility" rugged has the agiltity if ur ass has the ability appears 2 be

That rugged will do anything 2 get locked away i guess theres 2 many jail shower scenes in dvds these days for gays

RE is flamin just like a embER jus REmember hes in the joint every month from january 2 decembER

Thats why his raps so legit his flow he spits about some keira knightly bitch only its johnny depp he wish was holding it holy shit this hos a bitch hes a so so kid

In depth RE i give REspect unpaid parking fines is better then whiling
out with a loaded tech still yet your flows aint holding cheques even though every day u saying ruggs the best

that was 5th this 6th this kid is finished im going drink more bitch get back 2 to the dishes

-- Mon Sep 06, 2010 11:46 am --

[Loon E Lou]

Ya already a bitch & a fake, but I guess I'ma drop you 'like a dead wrestler', so now you 0-2 (owen too)//

Awesome word play dawg. I like the set up.

Seemed like joker was jus rhyming. Nutn really crazy and the format thru me off. I couldnt get a decent flow on it.

Rugg ur shit flowed nicer, was far more enjoyable, and i understood more of it.

In depth RE i give REspect unpaid parking fines is better then whiling
out with a loaded tech still yet your flows aint holding cheques even though every day u saying ruggs the best

Might be me but, shit like this, i dont get.

Ill go as far as sayin cat sweep. Rugg did it for me.

And thee weenaaah es......... Rugg

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[Kau the Lion]

Cat sweep to Rugged. Doesn't need much explanation. Joker, take some time with your verse. Use wordplay and punches and remember: in text your structure will help readers get a handle on your flow.

+1 Rugged

[Orfadox]

My Vote Goes To Rugged,Better Punches,Wordplay And Flow...All Round Better Verse! Jokerswild Like Kau Said Work On Ya Structure Dude It Threw Me Off Abit And Couldnt Really Follow The Flow