Poetic Aesthetics

[IntrinsicCadence]

So I uploaded this one before, but it didn't upload completely, so here it is again...

[Truup-Leef]

lol..it was str8 did'nt really sound like poetry type shit...ay man was ya old nam Karmel...you sound like this dude i ust to know...but the shit was str8 tho feed my shit


http://soundclick.com/truupa

[IntrinsicCadence]

Thanks for the peep and feed truup-- it's funny, cuz while I ain't never been known as Karmel, when I was in like 7th or 8th grade me and a couple friends who were just beginning to learn different instruments started a band called Carmel, though we never actually made any music since I was the only one who continued learning to play his instrument (I was on drums) for more than a couple months...

[IntrinsicCadence]

Appreciate the feed Yez

[Deciple]

this beat is way sick.. those little samples could bounce lol, it sounds like an old school freestyle type beat... has that 80's vibe to me lol.. vocals could be higher, idk if your style and type of rapping goes with this type of beat.. but its a decent track

[Sentus]

Your lyrics were great but like they said, your delivery was kinda soft and weak. I couldn't even hear you at some times.

[FlipSide]

tHE lYRICS aRE sTRAIGHT bRO... iT jUST sEEMS tHAT u dIDNT hAVE tHE eNERGY fOR tHIS tYPE OF fLOW... aLSO tHE vOCALS aRE tO lOW.. bUT iT sHOWS U hAVE sOME sKILLS tHERE.. kEEP dROPPING

[IntrinsicCadence]

Thanks for all the useful feed everybody. I'll aim on putting a bit more energy into the delivery of this one when I record it again. When I do this one live it's got all sorts of energy, it's actually one of my favorite pieces to do live cuz of that energy. So if I can get that across in the recorded version it'd be nice, that'll be my goal...