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..for the object of education is to teach us to love beauty. ( Plato)

And the thought itself creates a whirlwind, destroys time
avoids light, and creates a moment in such a void life
view upon it as though day creates the nights shine
and in a lifetime the world will understand the times...right?
see we overview the world with every structure its built on
then we build onto it as if it's no better then it is...huh?
you disagree well I got a few examples I'd like to show you
we put thought into this, helped it grow till it no longer knows u
we're suppose too, it makes everything better, what ur close to
things you once knew, become lies, and a unknown truth
overexposure to the same thing can cause a mind to manipulate
and thoughts move at different times, and at different rates
it transitions from nothing, allows itself few moments to be seen
covers itself in denial, and it flows as does a waters stream
creates itself into a new dimension, growth is it's introspection
the world transforms with it and it no longer becomes definitive
if it shows initiative it could be premature, and very limited...
the picture itself becomes a tainted silhouette of it's former shell
a shattered perspective if not treated correctly, supporters fell
others found a way to recreate it, time itself is it's former self
so if it supports itself, the scars of it will never courtship well...
in other words the components will never ever....make sense
but we as dreamers try to recreate it then...it will....break trends
it'll build society at higher rates, everything we ever tried to make
will become clearer...the thought alone...is all about...time..and place
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And the thought itself creates a whirlwind, destroys time
avoids light, and creates a moment in such a void life
view upon it as though day creates the nights shine
and in a lifetime the world will understand the times...right?
we put thought into this, helped it grow till it no longer knows u
we're suppose too, it makes everything better, what ur close to
things you once knew, become lies, and a unknown truth
overexposure to the same thing can cause a mind to manipulate
and thoughts move at different times, and at different rates
the picture itself becomes a tainted silhouette of it's former shell
a shattered perspective if not treated correctly, supporters fell
others found a way to recreate it, time itself is it's former self
very good read man Q does it again. man u need 2 start recording, my lazy ass cant be going around reading all these verses lol
THE FINAL SHADE' COMING FALL 2010
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thanx brah!
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I haven't been in here forever, but an ill drop. I've been lurking...
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excellent tone set up, nice flow!
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This is great. You got a way with language...
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