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Jus Doin' Me Feat. RoMe, Loon E Lou & HKX

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Jus Doin' Me Feat. RoMe, Loon E Lou & HKX

Post by HKX »

Another song that will be featured on the Chi 2 Cali album. This one was provided by RoMe of U.G.H n SmoKeD OuT ProD. I felt the track so much I asked RoMe that it had to be on the Chi 2 Cali album. Chi 2 Cali is almost complete, we're just wrapping up a few more songs. I believe we're going to drop it this month if stuff goes as planned. Enjoy the track and if you need feed plz leave a link so we could feed you back.


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1st Verse: Loon E Lou
2nd Verse: HKX
3rd Verse: RoMe
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Post by complexity »

Drake influence right off the bat.

My favorite flow that I've heard from Loon E on a collab. Very clear, to the point, with some dope lines like the Kanye one.

For the most part you didn't emphasize the rhymes H. At least to me that made everything sound more professional. Seems like every track you sound older and madder. I don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing.

Now the southern dude. To be honest, typical flow and sound for a southern guy. He actually sounded better on this track than you'd expect with two midwest guys.

I'd the reverse the order of the spitters.

Overall. A well put together song that had direction but seemed to lack passion. To me it seemed as if this was something you just wanted to put out instead of making a classic.

Like H mentioned in the first post. It sounds as if that is the game plan right now, to release a bunch of tracks and see what kind of reaction you get. Find out what works then go back and do that again which isn't a bad strategy at all.

I'll give a B for the production and quality.

C+ for the effort.

B+ for the atmosphere.

A- for the hook.
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Re: Jus Doin' Me Feat. RoMe, Loon E Lou & HKX

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Thats some great feed plex. To the point. I like the grading system. As long as we dont fail, its a pass to me. Appreciate the look man

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Post by HKX »

thanks 4 da feed Plex yea I did sound mad on dis huh it's cuz I was lmao... But dis is sumthin dat RoMe wanted me 2 jump on and when I heard da hook I was like yea I kno exactly wat imma do on it. Also Loon E is 4rm Cali and so is RoMe... yea RoMe jus got da southern type of flow it works tho I like his stilo like I told Loon E. You should be hearin' more collabs wit us and RoMe appreciate u feedin' dis Plex like how u are specific when u feed on things
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