TAKING OVER. 2xS (Double S)

[2xS]

Ite, So It's Been Awhile. I've Taken Some Advice, And Am Still Open To Criticism, With No Feedback From Me. So, Take A Look At Dis Track And Lemme Know Wat U Think. It's Tha Outro To My Mixtape, MEXtape Vol.2

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Lyrics:


AYYYY THIS SHIT RITE HERE IS LIKE. . .SOME ANTHEM TYPE SHIT. . .LIKE, IT MIGHT BE THE END OF THA MIXTAPE TYPE SHIT BUT. . .IT AINT THA END OF ME! HAHA. . .CUZ I AINT GOIN NOWHERE SEE. . .IMA BE RIGHT HERE. . .AND I SEE YOU HATAZ. . .BUT U NOT SEEIN ME! HAHA!!!


HOOK:
NIGGAZ MAD CUZ THEY NOT GONNA SEE ME
AND THEY HATE CUZ THEY NOT GONNA BEAT ME
I OWN BLAME EM CUZ THA GAME IS KOSHER
BUT IT AIN’T SUPPOSED TA. . .
AND THAT’S THA REASON Y I’M HERE TA TAKE IT OVER


VERSE:
I AINT GON COME ONTO THIS TRACK LIKE I AIN’T EVER SEEN TRICKS
OR EVEN SEEN FLIPS OF THAT EVERGREEN SHIT
BUT I WILL COME ON IT DEEP LIKE IT AIN’T EVER SEEN CLIQUES
AND LIGHT THIS BITCH ON FIRE WITTA KEROSENE TIP
I’M THAT ONE DUDE WHO’S RUNS THROUGH ANY OF HIS OBSTACLES
THAT SEMI FULL OF HOLLOW’S PULLED, SENT MANY TO THA HOSPITALS
NEVERMIND THA WEAPON THOUGH, KEEP IT IN ITS HOLSTER SEE
THE EYE OPENER OF MUSIC, SO NOW THE BLIND CAN NOTICE ME
MOST DON’T KNOW OF ME, SO THIS HERE IS THE INTRO
IN THE FORM OF AN OUTRO, THIS HERE IS THE TEMPO
ADD A LITTLE VOCALS, THIS HERE IS THE LENTO
MIX IT ALL TOGETHER AND THIS HERE’S THA CRESCENDO
YEAH I BEEN BROKE, BUT TRUTH IS I NEVER BEEN BITCH
BUT IF MY WORTH IS IN MY WORDS THEN I’VE ALWAYS BEEN RICH
THE FACT OF THE MATTER IS, AINT NOBODY SHATTERED SHIT
I’M DOING THIS FOR ME NOW SO TELL EM TO GET MAD AT THIS!


HOOK


VERSE:
NOW LEMME TAKE YOU BACK TO THE START OF MY MOVEMENT
WHEN I FIRST USED A PEN TO PAINT THE ART OF MY MUSIC
IT WASN’T REALLY GOOD THOUGH, MORE LIKE A ROUGH DRAFT
BUT I KEPT MOLDING IT AND TURNED IT TO A TOUGH CAST
IT ALL BEGAN WITH A LOGITECH MIC
AND THE DREAM TO BE HEARD OR A SHOT TA GET LIKED
ALWAYS TRY TA SHINE, I GOTTA BET RIGHT
CUZ I’LL BE DAMNED IF I FAIL JUS CUZ I GOTTA GET BRIGHT
I PROBLY SET HEIGHTS THAT NOBODY CAN ACHIEVE
BUT THE GOAL IS TO CLIMB WHERE THE BODY CANNOT BREATHE
OVERLOOK THE WORLD AS SOMEBODY WHO BELIEVED
AND DIE AT THE TOP JUS CUZ MY BODY COULDN’T LEAVE
THIS IS ME, THIS IS EVERYTHING I GOT
THIS IS EVERY BIT AS REAL AS A HEAVY STINGING SHOT
THIS IS EVERY SINGLE BLOCK, PUMPING EVERY SINGLE DROP
OF BLOOD THAT’LL FLOW IF YOU EVER THINK ITS NOT!


HOOK


VERSE:
I’M HERE TO TAKE IT OVER, STARTING WITH THIS WRITTEN FLOW
TAKE IT FOR MY PARENTS AND TAKE IT FOR MY BIGGEST FOE
TAKE IT CUZ THA PASSION IN MY HEART SED TO GET IT BRO
I TAKE IT THAT YOU‘RE MAD CUZ I DID IT AND YOU DIDN’T THO
OH YOU DIDN’T KNOW? THAT’S Y I DID THIS SONG TO
SHOW THE WORLD THAT I AIN’T SCARED TA BRING THE TRUTH UPON YOU
ANYONE THAT FEELS MY PAIN KNOWS THAT I AIN’T WRONG TO
PUT IT IN THIS TRACK AND BLOW IT UP JUST LIKE A BOMB DO
I AIN’T BOMB PROOF, MATTER FACT, I’M TICKIN NOW
BOUT TA PLANT ME ON THA GAME AND SEE IF I CAN RIP IT DOWN
YOU COULD SAY I’M TRIPPIN ROUND, BUT IN MY EYES, I’M TRICKING GROUND
AND I CA FEEL IN MY FEET EVEN AS I’M SITTIN DOWN
THIS IS MY TIME, BETTER SET THE CLOCKS BACK
SHATTERING THE SHATERPROOF SO CHECK TA SEE YOUR WATCH CRACK
EVERYTHING I DID IS FOR THIS MOMENT, SO JUST WATCH THAT
3. . .2. . .1. . .

[drunken jesus]

And Am Still Open To Criticism, With No Feedback From Me - i think you mean you won't complain about criticism but the wording makes it seem like you're not going to give any feedback to people who give some - probably why nobody has replyed to this yet

hook is aight could've been delivered alot better & the ain't suppose to bar sounds like it should have be on the end of it or something cuz it doesn't flow into the next bar well at all

verses are all solid good flow delivery and lyrics, no complaints really

your set-up & or mixing kinda sucks quality isn't that good lotta static and distortion, & as a producer myself something i gotta comment on is while the beat is dope why the hell did you rap over a beat with tags on it? makes you look kinda dumb to say the least... i can understand liking a beat and wanting to rap over it but if you can't get permission to use it then don't i could see doing a demo to see how it sounds before spending the $ but if this is going on your mixtape like you say it just makes you look like a dousche to every rapper & producer that hears it

[2xS]

Lol, Ma Bad At Tha Wording. Yeah, No Criticism From Me Is What I Meant. Good Looks On Tha Feed, And I'll Look Into Changing What Was Suggested. As For The Beat, I Planned On Purchasing The Lease So There's No Tags