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I like the feel of this. The first two guys followed the same Structure, then it switched up. Not sure if thats good or bad, but in my opinion I wasnt a fan. Also the breaks in the track come at weird times, and that doesnt help either. Over all the, I like where this was coming from and how you all stuck with each other on the top. Nice drop.
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This Was Ill, I Was Feeling The Flow, Multies & Delivery. Maan You Got it Going On Brother. Drop Sum More Quality Like These in Audio Chambers Dude.

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first guy - sounds like somebody but i can't think who, solid flow & delivery good verse - second guy - good flow, lyrics, & delivery - you - same as the other 2 pretty much everything was solid no complaints

mixing was on point thought the beat was good fairly simple but the chops had a nice bounce and added flavor, liked the way all of you switched tempos & meshed well together well on the track

good shit overall keep at it
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Mannnnnnnnnn For Real Im Feeling This Here... I Was Gonna Say Id Get Fucked Up N Listen To This.... Delivery Is Sick By All Parties Tho id Have To Listen To It More Than Once To Comment On The Lyricsm N Im At Work...This I Def Will Give A Second Listen To.... Dopeness
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Post by IntrinsicCadence »

After listening to a couple of what you've uploaded I've become a fan, especially of Cheef, and the vibe of your instrumentals. This track, especially Cheef's verse, reminds me of something similar to what the People Under the Stairs might drop. I also really appreciate the flow style all of you spit on this one, the kind of fast pace of the flow, combined with the mellow feel is the kind of sound I often times seek to find.
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Ok, honestly I couldn't tell when one verse ended and one began so and I couldn't tell who was who but I'll just say that this was a really dope song and everyone murked it. Rhymes were crazy and flow was insane. Good shit.
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