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Got The ill Flow With A Twist A Lime Ta Stand The Test Of Time
Conquest Aligned With Blades In Lines That Chop N Feed Ya mind
Stop. N Read The Signs, Cuz D B Reckless On Drives Like DUI's
And Smoke Bogies Not Up To Par Swing Above Like Tigers Score
Im Sick n Ball After Im Done With Flows Im Needin A Tylenol
Yall Sleepin Tall, The Harder Ta Fall Of Ya Raw Pedestal
N Crack ya Skull Ta See Where All That Nonsense Grows
Cuz I Bomb Text Bro Pearl Harbor Responses With Da Bushido
Wit Incredible Speed Ta Weave Thru The Scene Tho,The Matrix of me
Karate Do With kicks Aimed At Ya Throat Swift Disable VoCal Cords
Stick Ta Text, Ill Bless The Test Of Ya Spoken Word, Smoke Dis Herb
I Strike The Nerve N Hit Pressure In The Core Like Accu Puncture
I Talk Shit Wit A Plunger And Spit Balls Of Fire Like Da Mario Brothers
So Why Do I Bother Ya Existence on Paper ..But Its Going No Farther
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Conquest Aligned With Blades In Lines That Chop N Feed Ya mind
Stop. N Read The Signs, Cuz D B Reckless On Drives Like DUI's
And Smoke Bogies Not Up To Par Swing Above Like Tigers Score
Im Sick n Ball After Im Done With Flows Im Needin A Tylenol
Yall Sleepin Tall, The Harder Ta Fall Of Ya Raw Pedestal
N Crack ya Skull Ta See Where All That Nonsense Grows
Cuz I Bomb Text Bro Pearl Harbor Responses With Da Bushido
Had Sumthing Decent Here.. But Then You Went off Context Again
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[quoteGot The ill Flow With A Twist A Lime Ta Stand The Test Of Time
Conquest Aligned With Blades In Lines That Chop N Feed Ya mind][/quote]
nice start
I Strike The Nerve N Hit Pressure In The Core Like Accu Puncture
I Talk Shit Wit A Plunger And Spit Balls Of Fire Like Da Mario Brothers
So Why Do I Bother Ya Existence on Paper ..But Its Going No Farther
cool ideas...


overall had some solid ideas,but it was hrad for me 2 really get into, cuz the flow had no consistency for example :
bushido...Wit Incredible Speed Ta Weave Thru The Scene Tho,The Matrix of me
this line was cool,it ended abruptly to me, i would kept going for atleast and another half bar then work into a fluid change


stay up homie

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