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The world as I see it revolves around grievance
the scenic gets darker every second I'm breathin'
my breath gets colder, I got the world on my shoulders
I got dreams devolped in a casket they sent over
saved by the motions, a underdeveloped emotion
I can't tell what's real thanx to this overexposure
they called me a soldier, I stand alone amongst no one
a sense of devotion mixed with more then stellar performance
I could hurl myself away if I wanted till I lose oxygen
while the satellite emits waves of some dumb bitch gossipin'
the world is tossed into war again, more disorder then...
while they got me hangin' here watchin' it all like a ornament
but a ornament has no emotion cuz it's stuck in suspense
but how the fuck does that explain why I'm so fuckin' depressed
makes no fuckin' sense, I'm so lost I feel like no one knows me
and thats why I'm so lonely but how could anyone console me?
when I'm stuck here watching it revolve...God I'm so lost...
I swore, I heard a knock at the door but that's impossible
I scream at the otherside because I can't correspond, lost the view
blurred by my own tears, stumbled to my feet to yell again
WHOSE THERE like a drunken fool going through hell...then again
I may just be finding a excuse to think to myself, talk to myself
in front of the mirror watchin' myself, easily lost in myself
waiting for them to give me a answer, why can't we communicate
doomed to the fate of dying alone, I'ma go home if I'm losing this face
they sent me here cuz we losing the race, but there's not much
to do in space..........



so behind me is the sanctuary.....sanity

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Re: Sanity

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I could hurl myself away if I wanted till I lose oxygen
while the satellite emits waves of some dumb bitch gossipin'
the world is tossed into war again, more disorder then...
while they got me hangin' here watchin' it all like a ornament
I Agree With This Point Of View Bro...Nice Way To Put It Too...
when I'm stuck here watching it revolve...God I'm so lost...
I swore, I heard a knock at the door but that's impossible
I scream at the otherside because I can't correspond, lost the view
blurred by my own tears, stumbled to my feet to yell again
WHOSE THERE like a drunken fool going through hell...then again
I may just be finding a excuse to think to myself, talk to myself
in front of the mirror watchin' myself, easily lost in myself
waiting for them to give me a answer, why can't we communicate
doomed to the fate of dying alone, I'ma go home if I'm losing this face
they sent me here cuz we losing the race, but there's not much
to do in space..........
This Is Cool Bro..Seems U Got Into It Thru This Whole Last Piece... Reminds Me Of The Way Writers Are Secluded In Their Own World... Kinda Like U Tryna Develop A Split Personality.. I Dunno Its The Way It Strikes Me...
Everytime I Read One Of Ur Pieces i Become More Convinced Ur Certifiably Insane ...LOL.. Good Drop Tho Bro...Good Descriptive Imagery N Flow Like Always
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: Sanity

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good drop i'll leave feed in a min
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Re: Sanity

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This kind of invoke some Ray Bradbury type imagery for me. Good shit. Flow was perfect the whole way through.
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Re: Sanity

Post by drunken jesus »

didn't read anything but that pictures pretty cool props
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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