Cracks Knuckles

[Kuhlerblynd]

Havent done this shit in awhile, so bare with me while I work to shake this rust off... All feedback is appreciated...

Yo,
Ima kick it off like the Super Bowl, who's the pro?
You know I let these bitches hang man, that's what the noose is fo'
Big shots in the crunch time, arriving the new Kobe Bryant
Such a force, even riding solo Ive been known to riot
So bring ya ammo, cammo, and ya fuckin army of goblins
Rich endeavors pour thru ya hood, Im as cocky as Robin
And robbin comes so natural, if I want it believe I take it
When McNasty busts rhymes, fuck punchlines, getcha eye caved in
Murks got the sizzle like bacon, equipped with riddles and mayhem
Beautiful when I murder you when those fiddles are playin
One man show, these dues will learn that I got this all day
Im puttin those whores in the street, just call me Broadway
But if they're looking for a free way, they better get a map
So many of these faggots should be irrelavent in rap
Getting bread with shitty recipes that luckily involve dough
But its true emcees like you and me that make the game evolve though
Dont know about you, but Im getting my sword sharpened for World War Three
I enter unknown, but within a few weeks ya girl knows me...



Murk

[AbZ The Beast]

Mcnasty in the house

When McNasty busts rhymes, fuck punchlines, getcha eye caved in
Murks got the sizzle like bacon, equipped with riddles and mayhem

dope

Im puttin those whores in the street, just call me Broadway

rust what rust?

dope all around homie

[Kuhlerblynd]

Thanks man. I just havent put the words on paper in a minute if you know what I mean. The shit is still floating around my head constantly. Hip Hop never dies.

[complexity]

By any chance are you related to big stench?

Havent done this shit in awhile, so bare with me while I work to shake this rust off... All feedback is appreciated...

Yo,
Ima kick it off like the Super Bowl, who's the pro?
You know I let these bitches hang man, that's what the noose is fo'

[Not horrible, I really wasn't feeling the rhyme, probably because I'm way too white to be saying fo'.]

Big shots in the crunch time, arriving the new Kobe Bryant
Such a force, even riding solo Ive been known to riot

[Decent Concept]

So bring ya ammo, cammo, and ya fuckin army of goblins
Rich endeavors pour thru ya hood, Im as cocky as Robin

[Ok]

And robbin comes so natural, if I want it believe I take it
When McNasty busts rhymes, fuck punchlines, getcha eye caved in

[Second Favorite punch of the drop]

Murks got the sizzle like bacon, equipped with riddles and mayhem
Beautiful when I murder you when those fiddles are playin

[Good rhyming]

One man show, these dues will learn that I got this all day
Im puttin those whores in the street, just call me Broadway

[Favorite punch of the drop]


But if they're looking for a free way, they better get a map
So many of these faggots should be irrelavent in rap
Getting bread with shitty recipes that luckily involve dough
But its true emcees like you and me that make the game evolve though
Dont know about you, but Im getting my sword sharpened for World War Three
I enter unknown, but within a few weeks ya girl knows me...

[And...]

Murk

Ok. The structure was good enough. You know how to rap. I only really thought you brought heat to a couple of them punches. I liked the smoothness and transitions in the bars, not the best effort though.

[FlipSide]

Im At Work So I Wont Quote N All That But Yea... U Got Some Skillz Dude... Put Em To Use Bro... Had A Few Stand Out Bars in There..Good Word Play And So Forth...

[Phasewon]

Pretty ill shit, seamless flow and multies were on point, can't really complain about anything in the verse, solid shit.

[Munteskue1]

Rich endeavors pour thru ya hood, Im as cocky as Robin
And robbin comes so natural, if I want it believe I take it
When McNasty busts rhymes, fuck punchlines, getcha eye caved in

that was a hot bar. had a couple other good lines. rhyming was good, but just decent lyrical content.

[Kuhlerblynd]

Thanks for the feed.