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My Seeds Arent Nomads

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Was thinkin bout my kids..so i keyed this up

It Hurts To Look Past Weather Its Over Or Back
My Shoulders Will Crack the life We both Craft
We Layed In Da Sac Deposits Left In Her Bank
Investment Gives Back A precious Gem's Act's
Worth Measured With Math A Price With No tag
Life Spun on An Act, Changed Ways Of a Path'
Could Never Look Back.. Abort Mission? Vocab i Lack
Was Love Given Back Thru The Rib That She Has ?
My Name Bashed N Gave Back, The Hate Is Gift wrapped
Its Late To Give That, Ta Cribs Where I Lived At

Guess the Bone I Gave Is The Bone That Hoe Jacked
N The Home I Made N Sowed, In Place Alone Lacked
A Back In Bed's Acts, Life's Facts' Thats So Grand
Cuff's Rings On both Hands ,Will, The Lords Plans
Pangea As One Spaced Tore Both Our Own Lands
Crazed My Ways In Chase Became A Grown Man
The Grave Mistakes I Cant Erase, My Song Sang
With Grace In Place My Seeds Raised For Nomads

No strays for this man, No Way, I Prayed No DisBand
Commit With Wrist Bands, That Ward Wont Take Mad
The Weight On This Back Like Slaves Da Whip Cracks
Inside My Whipped Acts... And Still I Quit That
Test Failed Digress Jailed Meals is Hard To Digest
Real As My Unrest Them Bars Is Restless
Im Stuck With Dammed Gifts N Love For Dad's Kids
I'd Cut N Slash Wrist But Lives Will Scrap Death
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Post by eMCee Havic »

diggin this shit enjoyed the message in the music as technique would say, enjoyed the first paragraph the most
that rib line killed it
Flip i usually enjoy your pieces more religious than most but definatly on point keep droppin homie
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Post by Kau the Lion »

Not sure if this is the point that was trying to come across but I took it as you're having trouble with your wife but the kids are keeping it civil.

Anyway, good drop. The caps make it a little hard to find the flow. I had to read it twice to really feel it. There was one line that had a few too many syllables in it; "Could Never Look Back.. Abort Mission? Vocab i Lack." Other than that it flowed well. Some nice rhymes, too.
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We Layed In Da Sac Deposits Left In Her Bank
Investment Gives Back A precious Gem's Act's
Worth Measured With Math A Price With No tag
Life Spun on An Act, Changed Ways Of a Path'
Could Never Look Back.. Abort Mission? Vocab i Lack
Was Love Given Back Thru The Rib That She Has ?
last line was dope,...kids change life, for sure man
sometimes for the better sometimes not..but the kids are ALWAYS # 1


i can really feel the emotion

dope piece

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