The Slaughter

[Sentus]

I got a new song called "The Slaughter"
It's mostly a lyrical/punchline type song, let me know what you think.

It's on my myspace---http://www.myspace.com/Sentus7

Youtube:
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYFxHuVYFkM[/video]
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYFxHuVYFkM

[Deciple]

your flow is sick man... got good rhymes.. delivery is good.. quality is ok.. i listen to both tracks.. i like the "All I Do" ft Tash.. alot more... good tracks

[Kurse]

Not a bad track. I listened to it 3 times in order to try to catch things I might've previously missed. A few decent quotables. Mixing could use a little improvement. Solid delivery, but the execution was still very rough around the edges. There were a few parts where you fell off beat (or just didn't bother to follow it) ...but none the less it was a good listen. Instrumental was alright...nothing special. Only other thing...you should've cut all that remaining un-used beat off! If you're not using it...don't leave it there.

I give the overall presentation a 7/10

[Sentus]

Thanks for the feed guys, I'll try to work on all that my next track.

[FlipSide]

U got nice flow dude... i think the beats pretty dope.. i think some of ur bars were too short or delivered a like off key.. and yea cut the beat off after a loop or two.. ur writing is good... U should try to use ur primary a lil more and lower ya doubles a lil too it will give it a crisp sound... instead of the constant echo..i also have that problem/.... over all its a descent drop dude..stay uppin

[Sentus]

Thanks man, I'll work on that.

[Sentus]

Thanks alot man, and I don't know what 48th street is but I appreciate it.

[NoVeL]

Hot Shit, Sentus Keep Polishin That Delivery

[Sentus]

Haha thanks man, I'll try

[AbZ The Beast]

from what i heard very nice, before i got fed up, cuz my laptop blows and hates myspace.haha

so all i heard was the first 2 verses..solid man, very solid, good delivery and lines.didnt hear the end, but i agree with kurse

..you should've cut all that remaining un-used beat off! If you're not using it...don't leave it there.

ppl gonna wait around if they liked the first verses...then be like WTF..i want another verse..


solid man..

hit me up VIA PM's if u'd like some tips mixing wise

AbZ

[Sentus]

Thanks for the tips