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Re: Outta This World

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Ya crew could die if you really wanna choose the sky
Catch me in the cut you can find me gettin buddah high

haha Gangsta ^


I got just enough cream but it's enough to fill the truck
Just start callin me Chauncy the way my bills are up
I love weed just because I fill the dutch
Fam I'm the shit my fort smell like a million bucks

fresh .. i like that ^


favorite parts ^



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Re: Outta This World

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I'm diggin' this, the style reminds me of someone tho'
I don't know who, but I'm diggin' it man, really doin' your thing
very nice piece, different from you, but still got that vibe
smooth flow, diggin' the multi's, looks like it was for teh lulz
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Re: Outta This World

Post by eMCee Havic »

My minds outta this world and I aint blamin the flow
Each rhyme kicks ass I'm Liu Kang with the flow

^liked the metaphore good flow

You know I shoot threes like they came with the four
I aint nine eleven I'm far from plane with the flow

^ that was a good play on wording solid opener


Ya crew could die if you really wanna choose the sky
Catch me in the cut you can find me gettin buddah high
It aint a fucking thing to let ya body touch the ring
I walk the streets with any color and never tuck the bling
So try to touch the king I'll rip that mother fuckin thing
Hands on that fuckin beam I does my mother fuckin thing
I got just enough cream but it's enough to fill the truck
Just start callin me Chauncy the way my bills are up
I love weed just because I fill the dutch
Fam I'm the shit my fort smell like a million bucks
I know you scared faggot so don't try to test the nine
But, you best believe that I'll shine when it's reppin time

^the rest was dope but i thought it fell off on the level of the first opening bars still good multis flow, but it paled in compasion to the earlier shit half way threw

good drop i give it 7..5
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Re: Outta This World

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My minds outta this world and I aint blamin the flow
Each rhyme kicks ass I'm Liu Kang with the flow


Could always Change the last rhyming word.

You know I shoot threes like they came with the four
I aint nine eleven I'm far from plane with the flow

Building up ..

Ya crew could die if you really wanna choose the sky
Catch me in the cut you can find me gettin buddah high

lol word

It aint a fucking thing to let ya body touch the ring
I walk the streets with any color and never tuck the bling

Tough

So try to touch the king I'll rip that mother fuckin thing
Hands on that fuckin beam I does my mother fuckin thing

aight

I got just enough cream but it's enough to fill the truck
Just start callin me Chauncy the way my bills are up

Bam ..

I love weed just because I fill the dutch
Fam I'm the shit my fort smell like a million bucks

Like this

I know you scared faggot so don't try to test the nine
But, you best believe that I'll shine when it's reppin time

Cool.


U Weaved This Together Pretty good.. I See u switching ya style a Bit. thats Wassup, Had some tough Lines in there, good punch plays 2.

Stay Up N Keep It Moving .. Good drop
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Re: Outta This World

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I walk the streets with any color and never tuck the bling
So try to touch the king I'll rip that mother fuckin thing
It Was Dope Flowing But The Last Word Lacked
Just start callin me Chauncy the way my bills are up
I love weed just because I fill the dutch
Fam I'm the shit my fort smell like a million bucks
I Dunno But That Fill The Dutch Brings me Back..Since Where Im At Its G. Vegas, Threw Your Expected Punches And Made It Look Like U Can Say It With Emphasis.... Which Is What I Would Do..Nice Break Downs Fellas
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