Meet My Alter 3go? (new to the site feedback would b dope)

[A3go]

Real quick, im not bashin weezy just people that try to b like him.. and i wrote this awhile ago, i think kanyes fuckin amazing w/e i wrote was jus outa frustration at the moment haha hope u feel it.



ive always had a passion for hip hop
speakin out cause been hearin whats its not
frustrating to see those with money make the least sense
been hearin bass runs, but none to reach the back fence
just sayin its been too long
cant keep waitin on people to write the wrongs
gotta spit whats right
cause weve been settlin with whats left
my ears stopped drummin cause these tracks dont move me
they get catchier and catchier but none stick..
just cause ur weezin dont mean u sound sick
and now none can last forever
please stop tellin me your the greatest ever
search for the body of tupac
his mind is burried treasure
they sent messages to reach the soul
todays just junk mail till ur inbox is full
im tryna say my hearts gone cold
emcees stop praticing cause they see gold
cause i miss the college dropout
u kno, the one that wasnt taylored swiftly
but hand crafted to perfection..
get em high and family business just two to mention
tell me how long i gotta wait
before hip hop ressurects its gettin late
im counting every second passing till the second commin
priests keep massing lies while i stay runnin
backwards, campaigning the truth as others stay frontin

[eMCee Havic]

lol this actually wasnt that bad

(i hate kanye)

but besides that i liked the message about how rappers these days at least the rich ones lost sight of whats real its all jibberish.

but the flow was off like a mother fucker, good read, read like a POEM, more than a rap..

but i definately like to see some new ish from you

welcome to illest lyrics bro

[QwarterZ]

This was cool, not amazing but cool
I dig what you doing, just venting out
speaking your mind and all that, getting your feet wet
yearning for a better path in Hip Hop
I'm diggin' it man, very nice drop, got some potential
stay active I can see you picking up on some sick shit
keep writing my dude!!!!!!!!