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Eyes In Reverse

Expand your artistic ability through poetry and story telling. Poetry has been given new life ever since the inception of hip hop. Relax for a minute and explore your poetic side here.

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Re: Eyes In Reverse

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Dam Bro I Had Broken It Down And Lost My Wi Fi ...So It Erased When I Pressed Enter...Pffft!!!!!!

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Fingers pick at guitar strings//
While a brain projects bizarre things//
Eyes that had it all//
Mind like a box against the attic wall//
Great Opener...
Life scripted into a graphic novel//
Emotions in a tipped over plastic bottle//
Blind folded/ dancing in the line of fire//
Good Build But THen For...
Just a lost sock behind the dryer//
LMAO
Brain waves cradle the seashores at night//
Eyes orchestrating harmony with keyboards and mics//
Yesterday's stuffed in the trash can//
Tomorrow's in the hands of the sandman//
So long/ goodnight//
Go on/ goodbye//
But The Seashores At Night, Keyboards N Mics Reference Did It For Me....Dope Drop... U Flooded The Section Dude..LOL
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: Eyes In Reverse

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

nice, one of the best written poetic drops i've seen, very powerful and the rhyme scheme came off very smooth, keep droppin


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"Life scripted into a graphic novel//
Emotions in a tipped over plastic bottle//"
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Re: Eyes In Reverse

Post by QwarterZ »

This piece was dope Rugged, you took ever part of the body
and incorporated it into this piece, I may have missed the concept of it
then again it some of the stuff just stayed stuck in my head
the veins into red wine, thoughts like Jim Morrison, really had me caught up
I enjoyed it man, like I said before you always got some sick writing skills on you...
keep doing you brah!

sorry I haven't responded to this earlier, or anything else for that matter

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