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MohammedT
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let me know what you think.
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MesaR
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Uh i wasn't really feeling this bro, flow wasn't the best and their were not really any stand out lines in you're verse to make up for it, i dont know just wasnt digging it all that much , keep dropping but
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I kinda agree with the first guy, you got potential though, keep working hard.
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cool, i appreciate the honesty. Uppin.
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You had some dope rhymes, thats why I said you have potential but you sound like you're rapping at a funeral, if you get what I'm saying.
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Sentus wrote:You had some dope rhymes, thats why I said you have potential but you sound like you're rapping at a funeral, if you get what I'm saying.
i agree with him... no emotion at all...
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